Oh, I remember why I don't like Inui fics. He makes my anxiety levels skyrocket. :|
So why am I reading this. :|
I adored that paragraph about Tezuka and Ryoma. You can guess why. Cameos are certainly entertaining. That girl who alternates between Tezuka and Oishi, WHY, THERE IS NO COMPETITION. :|
Slight cliches touched upon (player Fuji, oooh gosh, I think most of the hate has successfully been pinned on Yukimura :D) and there's quite a bit of telling, but that's to be expected because it's Inui's pov, after all.
Am.. quite intrigued to see how this plays out. Second last sentence, ♥.
That was physical merits out the way Is there supposed to be 'of' between that or does it work eitherway?
I've always thought that either worked, but now I am not so sure. Hmm.
Oh god I had to work so hard to stop my OTP showing in this. And indeed, there's quite a number of cliches. Hopefully my reasoning for them makes them tolerable in the end. I'm pretty much crossing my fingers on a lot with this one.
Couldn't do much about the telling either - as you said, Inui POV. :/ I understand now why so few people write him. He encourages bad habits.
YOU READ IN THEIR BIOS ONCE, RIGHT? THAT OISHI WAS QUITE POPULAR WITH THE LADIES. I agree, no contest.
I am very surprised to see you reading this too. o__o
The more I read over it, the more right it seems. Must be my lack of exposure to them. :-?
AHAHA. I. How is Tezuka in this fic? I'm reading this with a terrible, terrible bias, and I have a feeling Tezuka's gonna be all alone and tennisy, or, y'know, not touched upon. /:)
Inui is one of the most hardest person to write for me, even if I'm looking at him from an outsider's pov, so I cannot imagine the difficulty you faced when writing. OR, WELL, MAYBE BARELY, SINCE YOU ARE RESIDENT DATA MASTER. :|
MY TEZUKABIAS, NO AMOUNT OF CANON CAN BEAT IT. :|
...I'm not really reading it. Truly. :| *pokes* Go post a link to the first chapter on the main comm if you haven't already. Bet there's more interested people there. :Db
I'm not a member of the main comm, remember? Can't post there. Not 100% sure I want to. The fic may yet be full of fail. I didn't get a beta on this one.
Hee, Tezuka does have his part (at least three scenes that I can think of), but yes, I have not involved him too much, simply because... you know... hard to resist the OTP.
Oh, gods. I am a rarepair whore, seriously. And I totally know how you feel: I'm a big big EijiRyo fan, but I've come across like, 5 fics on that pairing in total?
You've caught my attention with this one. :D InuiRyo isn't something I would've thought of, admittedly, but this is really intriguing. Good on Inui for the Inui-like ending XD and good on you for writing this. Can't wait to see where it goes. ♥
When did that picture happen in the anime??????!!!!! He looks so cute XXX33333!!!!!!!!!! And I'm not a fan of InuRyo (mostly because I've never stumbled upon anything good written about them), but your stories are always good, so I'll give it a try ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I do believe it was episode 163, 'Kaidoh's Unknown World', where Kaidoh loses his memory. He remembers how to fight with Momoshiro however, leading to that scene there. :)
Hee, thanks for taking a chance, hope it doesn't disappoint! (And if it does, be sure to tell me so I know. ;))
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So why am I reading this. :|
I adored that paragraph about Tezuka and Ryoma. You can guess why. Cameos are certainly entertaining. That girl who alternates between Tezuka and Oishi, WHY, THERE IS NO COMPETITION. :|
Slight cliches touched upon (player Fuji, oooh gosh, I think most of the hate has successfully been pinned on Yukimura :D) and there's quite a bit of telling, but that's to be expected because it's Inui's pov, after all.
Am.. quite intrigued to see how this plays out. Second last sentence, ♥.
That was physical merits out the way
Is there supposed to be 'of' between that or does it work eitherway?
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Oh god I had to work so hard to stop my OTP showing in this. And indeed, there's quite a number of cliches. Hopefully my reasoning for them makes them tolerable in the end. I'm pretty much crossing my fingers on a lot with this one.
Couldn't do much about the telling either - as you said, Inui POV. :/ I understand now why so few people write him. He encourages bad habits.
YOU READ IN THEIR BIOS ONCE, RIGHT? THAT OISHI WAS QUITE POPULAR WITH THE LADIES. I agree, no contest.
I am very surprised to see you reading this too. o__o
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AHAHA. I. How is Tezuka in this fic? I'm reading this with a terrible, terrible bias, and I have a feeling Tezuka's gonna be all alone and tennisy, or, y'know, not touched upon. /:)
Inui is one of the most hardest person to write for me, even if I'm looking at him from an outsider's pov, so I cannot imagine the difficulty you faced when writing. OR, WELL, MAYBE BARELY, SINCE YOU ARE RESIDENT DATA MASTER. :|
MY TEZUKABIAS, NO AMOUNT OF CANON CAN BEAT IT. :|
...I'm not really reading it. Truly. :| *pokes* Go post a link to the first chapter on the main comm if you haven't already. Bet there's more interested people there. :Db
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Hee, Tezuka does have his part (at least three scenes that I can think of), but yes, I have not involved him too much, simply because... you know... hard to resist the OTP.
YOU KEEP YOUR TEZUKABIAS. *___* IT IS SHINY.
*puts on data master cap*
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You've caught my attention with this one. :D InuiRyo isn't something I would've thought of, admittedly, but this is really intriguing. Good on Inui for the Inui-like ending XD and good on you for writing this. Can't wait to see where it goes. ♥
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Hopefully it won't disappoint!
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I am confused, but it's ADORABLE.
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Hee, thanks for taking a chance, hope it doesn't disappoint! (And if it does, be sure to tell me so I know. ;))
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