Technoromanticism - Chapter 6

Jan 25, 2009 17:18

Title: Technoromanticism

Author: Sinnatious

Summary: TezRyo Robot AU.

Rating: Definitely Mature.  For the usual culprits.

Author’s Note: Back to the regular update schedule now.  Only three chapters left!

Chapter 6.0 )

longfic, tenipuri, fanfiction, tezryo, technoromance

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agentlerain January 25 2009, 07:40:53 UTC
;________; So the theory that Tezuka is the robot continues. a relic of the ancient past. Sin, you torture him! ;__;

However, I'm terribly amused by the whole situation with the electro-magnet. I WAS RIGHT! *____* There was the bedroom scene after all. And you even had a bathroom scene too. :3 :3 :3

Ryoma gave off a pleasant warmth - Tezuka could already feel himself growing drowsy. This made me remember a strange yaoi one-shot I read once. A new type of pillow - boy shaped, and by sleeping on his lap you'd get a fantastic sleep. *____*

I <3 how Atobe keeps referring Ryoma as 'it'. :3

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sinnatious January 26 2009, 11:07:10 UTC
O___o You've certainly found some unique one-shots. :P I am... sort of intrigued?

Bedroom AND bathroom scene for double points! ;) You certainly called it.

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roseofthine January 25 2009, 07:45:40 UTC
So, so adorable. =D

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pat_ace87 January 25 2009, 08:11:36 UTC
OMG poor Ryoma XXXXXXOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! I can't imagine how weird he must have felt when Tezuka started to strip XXXDDDD!!!!!!!!! LOL, great chapter!!!!!

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jade_peace January 25 2009, 17:27:59 UTC
Sin~ The ending was gorgeous in a tragic sort of way *_______*

=3 Atobe referring to Ryoma as 'it' was hilarious.

v. v. cute <3

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sinnatious January 26 2009, 10:23:00 UTC
Hee, thanks. *__*

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firedraygon97 January 25 2009, 19:27:37 UTC
♥♥ BATH SCENE. BED SCENE. YES.

Hahahaha, Ryoma reminded me of my dog in this chapter, destroying the electromagnet like that. My dog got his leash, which sucks for him since now he doesn't get to go out for walks until we buy a new one. >D It parallels kind of nicely with how Ryoma has to stick with Tezuka 24/7, though I'm sure they'll both start to enjoy each other's constant company soon enough. XP

Awww, Tezuka having an emo moment at the end is cute, especially with Ryoma trying to pep talk him there ("So you're just going to give up?"). Nice work.

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sinnatious January 26 2009, 10:22:39 UTC
THEY ARE NECESSARY COMPONENTS, ALWAYS. ^__^

Heh heh, nice comparison with the dog. Completely true, though.

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