Technoromanticism - Chapter 1

Jan 04, 2009 20:40

Title: Technoromanticism

Author: Sinnatious

Summary: TezRyo Robot AU.

Rating: Definitely Mature.  For the usual culprits.

Author’s Note: Clearly this is the result of reading far too much Isaac Asimov, Philip K. Dick and Peter F. Hamilton lately. It has all melted into one pot in my brain, and when TezRyo was added to the mix, something somewhat odd ( Read more... )

longfic, tenipuri, fanfiction, tezryo, technoromance

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anonymous January 4 2009, 11:35:05 UTC
Oh my god the opening. /:) /:) /:)

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Atobe fluffed out a monogrammed handkerchief before carefully folding it and replacing it in his pocket.

Oh man have I ever told you how much I love this Atobe? He's. sfjkhkadg. And then suggesting Tezuka play with the bioroid some moooore. *_*

I think what I really, really, really still love is the fact that he's just lying there, and the gold eyes are following Tezuka, and he's blinking lazily. *_* That's such a tragically touching scene.

One thing I noticed this time around was that the time Tezuka gets to play with the bioroid is extremely, very short? I might've missed something that stated the purpose of the establishment, but uh... :D;

OH MAN RYOMA GLARING AT ATOBE WHEN HE TOUCHES HIM. *_* And then subsiding when Tezuka asks. Awwww. akjhadkjghjds

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anonymous January 4 2009, 11:35:44 UTC
Oh woops, forgot to log on. Am currently on the sister's laptop transferring some things. :|

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sinnatious January 4 2009, 11:51:45 UTC
I knew it was you anyway. ;)

Well, an hour flies by when you're both having fun and doing something illegal... :P *coughs* And most guys only require ten minutes. Point, though, I should have emphasized that time passage some more.

DON'T BE RAISING YOUR EYEBROW AT ME! /:) :P

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argentum_luna January 4 2009, 12:33:47 UTC
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sinnatious January 4 2009, 12:57:57 UTC
asdlkfjlfj OMG YOUR ICON! Ciiiiieeeeeeell! <3

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agentlerain January 4 2009, 15:02:29 UTC
*grins*

OMG.

I love it already.

a;sldjalsd ajldajkdlakjdlakd! *___________* ♥ ♥ ♥

The setting. Ryoma on the bed. Tezuka calling Ryoma a him and Atobe correcting him. ;__; Learning capabilities and the moaning. Tezuka making him moan and lasdkjalsakdsla handjob. *___* The thought that Ryoma learnt the moaning from others. ;__; I'm seeing Chobits in this. (yes, Clamp again! :P)

asldjalsdkajskja! I haven't read much Asimov, but you make me want to take his work up again. I only read like a few chapters of Foundation. It's was for uni. :P

*pokes* With only the hints about robots taking care of finance and shops and the world! I can't wait to see more of the world Tezuka lives in.

;___; Ryoma is a robot. ;___; (Already thinking about the end.)

*__* CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE. :D :D

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sinnatious January 5 2009, 13:36:07 UTC
(omg yes there is Chobits influence in this. Giant melting pot of robot influences.)

I've never actually read Asimov's Foundation series, but I've probably read just about every short story he's ever printed and a bunch of his essays. What did you think of the few chapters you read?

Heh heh, after all that, you don't actually get to see that much of the world. I take a very narrow focus. :P Though your comment does make me wish I'd written more of it. *is sort of wistful now*.

I SHALL DELIVER... on Wednesday. XP

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agentlerain January 5 2009, 16:38:26 UTC
(How do you turn Ryoma off? ;P)

It's good, the way it twists and keeps you thinking and expecting. I don't read a lot of sci-fi but I still liked it's setting and people easy to understand and relate to. Basically, it talks about studying social history (by using mathematics) as a way of predicting the future. Sounds confusing but as a theory, it's pretty *__* to think about. I was told in a tutorial it focuses a lot on the plot, rather than its characters. :S Don't know if you'd like that, but it started out quite alright.

:D I also read Asimov's short story about the super computer and the big bang theory. alskdaj;slaks;l that one blew my mind, it was so awesome! "And then, there was light." :3

Oh well, focus on Tezuka and Ryoma is always preferred to than staring at scenery. :D lasakajlsdakd Throw in a bit? ;) You know you wanna! ;)

It's Tuesday now, 1.23AM here. *___* FIC in less than 24 hours.

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tezukaryo January 4 2009, 19:39:13 UTC
Aaaaw...Tezuka is adorable when he blushes...there's so many things that I like about this story so far and I can't wait for more...you stories are always so amazing and a joy to read and look forward too. ^__^

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firedraygon97 January 4 2009, 21:55:28 UTC
POSSIBLE SPOILER SPECULATION?!?!

...I have a feeling Ryoma's not a robot. :/ The whole Atobe rant about an unknown company making something so realistic makes me suspicious. If that's the case, then poor Ryoma and co...

Love Atobe in this. He's absolutely shameless, just the way I like 'im. >D Looking forward to when Ryoma can match him tit for tat. Please write more soon~!

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firedraygon97 January 4 2009, 21:56:20 UTC
Whoops, sorry, replied on someone else's comment...

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sinnatious January 5 2009, 13:43:00 UTC
LOL, I admire your reckless courage in making predictions in the very first chapter!

Next chapter on Wednesday, should all things go according to plan.

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jade_peace January 5 2009, 02:21:50 UTC
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*_____*

<3

Did I mention that I love you?

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sinnatious January 5 2009, 13:44:44 UTC
It never gets old dear jade. ♥ ♥ ♥ :P

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