The Dispossession of Echizen Ryoma Chapter 27

Apr 09, 2008 16:22



By Sinnatious

Summary: When Ryoma finds himself in a tough situation, his pride might keep him swimming, but it’s Tezuka who keeps his head above water.

Rating: PG-13

Author’s Note: Second last chapter, yay!  Okay, we're getting into cavity territory again.

Previous chapters can be found here.

The Dispossession of Echizen Ryoma

Chapter 27

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longfic, tenipuri, fanfiction, tezryo, doer

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sleepingfingers April 9 2008, 06:30:56 UTC
Aww, cavities is definitely a good thing in this case. :D Tezuka trying to be Karupin for Ryoma's just beyond sweet; and the fact that Ryoma now has his own room and just. I can't wait for the next chapter, although I'm sad that the story is coming to an end.

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sinnatious April 9 2008, 09:18:15 UTC
I'm more relieved! Finally this fic can safely leave my head and I won't be compelled to work on it anymore! :P

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su24 April 9 2008, 07:13:11 UTC
karupin=tezuka...no wait...it's kunimitsu now...:)....
can't wait for the last chapter!!! :)

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faire_estela April 9 2008, 07:33:07 UTC
I want to burn Nanjiroh's magazines ♫

Ehem, right. My bet for the ending goes to Echizen not going back to his parents' and staying at Tezuka's -Tezuka's parents want to keep him as a pet, after all- and to Ryoga being surprisingly nice and sexy and getting all friendly with Nanako (...er ^^') and with everyone living happily ever after. Except for Nanjiroh, of course, who will be refused for the rest of eternity by everyone. What do you think about that theory, Sin? =D=D

Also, where did that 'let's get a Tezublanketthingy' plan end? I suspect Echizen would benefit from it too.

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sinnatious April 9 2008, 07:46:54 UTC
I do believe that yusahana is doing something about it! *____* The Ryoma pillow/Tezuka blanket combination shall be win.

Your bet is noted, and your theory rather accurate? I don't find the ending particularly satisfying, personally (I took a bit of influence from Konomi, there. Except more TezRyo.)

Ryoma/Nanako?! A new form of Echizencest?

Oh boy, if you hate Nanjiroh after this chapter.... :/

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faire_estela April 9 2008, 07:51:47 UTC
WHAT. WHAT. I WANT. THAT WOULD BE SO COOL. YUSAHANA. WHAT'S THAT WHAT'S THAT WHAT'S THAAAAAAAT!

...you brought them both together to Germany? Heh, that would make me all sorts of happy. Echizen and Tezuka eating sausages. Sausages. Together. Like. Together. Eeeeh *__*

Ah well, I guess we'll see tomorrow =D

Oh, come on. We've already seen several Nanjiroh/Nanako and Ryoma/Nanako around. I know I've talked at least once about Rinko/Nanako. Ryoga/Nanako is the only combo still left to see... and, curiously enough, the only one I deem possible. I'd actually like to read some serious fic focusing on that pairing.

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sinnatious April 9 2008, 07:57:29 UTC
Ryoma/Nanako?! I have seen no such thing! :O

You bring up a point about Ryoga/Nanko, however. *is thoughtful*

She already managed to acquire a really scary inverse Fuji shirt. *shudders* http://yusahana6323.livejournal.com/3936.html#cutid1

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argentum_luna April 9 2008, 08:32:14 UTC
Ahhhh Buchou cuddling ♥!!

(I can't quite imagine Tezuka yawning-- so cute!)

I kinda hope Karupin moves in, and they can all snuggle happily together >_<

I rather like your Kuniharu. XD

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sinnatious April 9 2008, 09:19:48 UTC
Kuniharu is difficult to write, I'm glad you liked him. And that image is too adorable for words. *___*

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yusahana6323 April 9 2008, 13:47:17 UTC
Noooo ennnddddd :(

Oh, fine, end it. But it will be a good ending, so my whining will be put to rest. Probably.

Ryomapillow will be coming up soon... then I just need to get a blanket for Tezuka-screenprinting. To the new ruler of the developed world... W*lmart! XP

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sinnatious April 10 2008, 06:01:18 UTC
*_____* If you manage to pull of a Ryoma blanket and a Tezuka pillow, you DO realize that you would rule the fandom FOREVER?

I hope you like the ending. I was a bit meh over it, personally. But it makes you think? (I hope?)

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yusahana6323 April 11 2008, 13:21:41 UTC
I thought it was a Ryoma pillow and a Tezuka blanket? XP oh, I would rule ne? Hmmm... good. *rubs hands and begins to plot evil*

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sinnatious April 11 2008, 13:27:52 UTC
Um, yes, you're right, it was. THE THOUGHT OF IT MADE ME SO DELIRIOUSLY HAPPY I TURNED TEMPORARILY DYSLEXIC?

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