The Dispossession of Echizen Ryoma Chapter 25

[sinnatious]

By Sinnatious

Summary: When Ryoma finds himself in a tough situation, his pride might keep him swimming, but it’s Tezuka who keeps his head above water.

Rating: PG-13

Author’s Note: This chapter was a rather difficult one to write. I wasn’t entirely happy with Ryuuzaki-sensei, but hopefully it came out okay.

Previous chapters can be found here.

Comments

[jade_peace]

Oh, the finger-lacing, hand-squeezing, thumb-rubbing. *_____*

<33

And the bad influence.

[missselarne]

“But we don’t have much longer left for tennis this year. Homework will still be there when the snow falls.”

It was a compelling argument. “I don’t know what my parents are talking about. You are a bad influence on me.”

*_* Oh Sin. This is exactly what I needed after my day. Just that one little bit. Tezuka can not deny the logic in Ryoma's logic. :|

[sinnatious]

Ryoma's tennis logic is infallible. Tezuka cannot resist. :P

[sinnatious]

The feeling is mutual.

[mimineko_chan]

I'm at chapter 25! YAY! I'll be able to finish today. Hoyay! And I might say, this is freacking fantastic fic. I thank Kaori for giving you a kick in the butt and convince you to put this fic up.

Question: How come Fuji was panting? I must admit that the effect of a panting Fuji throught very hot (yes yes dirty mind at work here) makes the story more real. But they are all regulars here. Even sprinting to the room doesn't take that much, ne? Well, I can't say very well. Last week, I had to meet a teacher and her office was in the 7th floor. And no, I didn't take the elevator, I took the stairs and I was panting. I guess that I'll have to do more exercices (but I am just too lazy XD

[sinnatious]

Anyone will pant after sprinting, no matter how fit, even if they can jog for a long time without breaking a sweat. And there would be some distance from the courts to the student council room I assume, including sets of stairs. I did it like that to emphasize the urgency. And maybe just a little bit for hot panting FujiI admittedly didn't research the law that thoroughly, but based on hearsay with people who have dealt with runaways as well as people who have dealt with family services, it is a bit of a loophole. If a child is above a certain age the rules change, but it's this loophole that allows runaways girls to go live with their boyfriends for months even when their family wants them back. Again, this is based on the Australian legal system - Japan, Canada or America might be different. It's all very contextual. In any case, I don't wish to read tomes of legal gibberish just for a few points of a fanfic. Family services can be a bit retarded sometimes - ineffectual for the people who need it, and completely overbearing

[roseofthine]

Right, forgot who I was talking to.
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and eeee, last line. =D and bad influences. <333

(we all know ryouma's just irresistable. ;D)

...sorry i forgot to check this place. -ducks tomatoes-

I shouldn't have. ;~~~; This was beautiful. <3