The Dispossession of Echizen Ryoma Chapter 15

[sinnatious]

By Sinnatious

Summary: When Ryoma finds himself in a tough situation, his pride might keep him swimming, but it’s Tezuka who keeps his head above water.

Rating: PG-13

Author’s Note: The second half of this chapter is a bit exposition heavy. :/ But the first half has Seigaku Regulars! Yay!

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6 

Comments

[ryocat]

Wow! Coming back to so many chapters is great(-o, burning BABY! Eh.) I finally got up to date, and I have to say that I don't dislike it as you thought I would. I don't dislike it at all. Fine, so I still want to kill Nanjiroh, but the relationship between the Pillars and now the appearance of the rest of Seigaku manage to keep me away from those urges.

Ryoma scowled. "No cracks about my height, please."
"Since when I have I ever made fun at your expense? It was a serious question."
That's brilliant!

And I particularly liked the ending of the previous chapter - Echizen smiling for the first time in ages during a tennis match against Tezuka. That's just like him. I loved it.

<3~

[faire_estela]

Oh dear, hold on, that's me. I fail at life and at logging in/off :S:S

[sinnatious]

*pounces* Welcome back! I have missed your imposing buchou icon. ;)

I am glad you do not dislike it then. A relief! That exchange was one of my favourites.

What a relief, for a second I was so confused! *laughs* The real question is now - how many LJs do you keep up to date? :O

[pat_ace87]

YAY Another chapter XXXDDD!!!!!!!!!! I've had two hours of sleep and just submitted my long 15 page paper to my teacher and I can finally read this 8D!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew that Fuji and Inui noticed something, it would be near impossible for those two to not notice that there was something wrong :3!!!!! When are Tezuka's parents coming back?????? What will happen then 8X????????!!!!!!!!!!!! And what is thing thing he can doooooooooo (I have a feeling I should know what it is ... but I don't know 8S....)......Now I'm gonna spend the rest of the day coming up with all this bunch of crazy things that I think he can do ~.~.....

[m3owchan]

Hmm~ I wonder what Ryoma's going to do.. (lol, Horio xD)

[sinnatious]

Your wish is my command.

[roseofthine]

...milk. >8D

[roseofthine]

He hoped it was the former, and hoped it wasn’t about him.
WHAT A DORK. <3

That is, cheerful for Echizen.
-giggling-

(inui how do you figure out ryouma's weight? xD and, i guess the weight loss is good for tezuka. he doesn't need to be burdened as much when he carries ryouma around. -shot-)

so most of them were unlikely to notice the increased reticence unless actively looking for it.
WHICH THEY ARE, NA? 8D

it wasn’t like the house was that messy so it shouldn’t be too hard.
...-blames tezuka-

and was probably the top of his class in English as well, though Ryoma could still pick on his grammar and vocabulary.I love you. Just something I've been wondering, though--any idea what type of English they use there? I mean, Ryouma was American-born, not English, so asdfjkl

[roseofthine]

asdfjkl; thanks so much. <333

-always thought they taught british english-

I guess I just confused Japan with China. >___>