Beloved, Chapter 23

[sinnatious]

The crash resounded across the ruins - an explosion of shattering wood and tiles that shivered straight through his chest.

His gaze whipped around, focusing on the riding cloud of dust and smoke and fire billowing from the Church.  “Genesis!”

He took a reflexive step forward, but Reno was still there, electro-rod swinging and not even missing a

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[caterfree10]

SON OF A SALDKFJHDSLASKJFHDSJLKVBLINCXBVLIEWOXLKMNSDVBCVDF

I hope you realize that, with the rate of these cliffhangers, I'm not likely to actually last to the end of this fic. B'| Granted, it doesn't help I practically sped-read this because I was very eagerly following the action, BUT MINOR DETAILS.

Oh god at least Gen's okay but oh god Tifa's on the edge and oh god we do not need a repeat of Aerith (and we may not even get as good an ending to that seeing as Tifa's human as opposed to Cetra asdlfjkdjlfkhsdfkj) but then oh god Gen's fucking MIA in the middle of a fight again and oh god Cloud's being controlled by Seph again askfjhdslkjfhs GODDAMMIT RUDE AND RENO IF THERE'S ANYTHING YOU CAN DO TO WAKE UP AND STALL OR SOME SHIT UNTIL GEN GETS BACK IN THE RING AND/OR CLOUD GETS HIMSELF OUT OF SEPH'S CONTROL, THAT'D BE REALLY APPRECIATED RIGHT ABOUT NOW ASJFKHDLSKFHSLKDJFHKLAJFHDJSK ooh, record for longest run-on sentence review going on rn, I should check this /brick'dI'm just going to go curl into the corner and die until the next

[sinnatious]

I cannot actually figure out how not to leave you guys on a cliffhanger anymore. When it reaches this stage of a fic it's really hard!

Zombie caterfree at Christmas!

[caterfree10]

Too true, goodness knows it happens in many good fics as they get closer to the end. Oh well, price to pay for following good fic. *nod*

BRAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSSSSS xD I actually played a one-armed zombie in a high school production of Night of the Living Dead! Good times, omg. x3

[sinnatious]

...Your high school was way, way cooler than mine.

[signrain]

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Where is Nanagi??!?

[sinnatious]

I have not forgotten him!

[signrain]

Glad to hear that xD

[ynyuki]

First Reaction: :D!!! Beloved Update!!!

Second Reaction: O_O Sephy you've earned more Evil points this time...

Third Reaction: Nooooooo Clooooooud Q_Q...

End Reaction: Nooooo... Cliffy agaiiiiin...

<3 x.x

[sinnatious]

As though Sephiroth's evil points weren't already in the billions? XD

<3

[fezastwin]

I haven't left a review on the last couple chapters, because all it would have said would have been "G'ah! Cliffhanger!" and here you went and did it AGAIN.

You Meanie! ;)

I'm thinking Genesis had a plan to lure Seph in close to somehow dose him with the water.
Whatever it is, it better work.

Rude and Reno better get their butts in gear and get over there, because Tifa is the last person on Genesis' priority list right now.

I'm also wondering if you've ever read esama's kind of weird FFVII time travel fic, "Ultima", as her teenage Cloud was rather fond of using that sleep command...

[sinnatious]

Heh, I would apologise, but it would be a lie. :) I would think you would be used to my propensity for cliffhangers by now! Thanks for commenting though.

Ah, I haven't! I love esama's work as a rule, but A/B/O and D/S-style verses are a bit of a squick for me personally so I tend to avoid them.

[fezastwin]

Yeah, I usually don't go in for that either, and esama's Cloud was kind of evil in that his command for sleep was actually to stop breathing.

Anyway, try not to leave us hanging here for too long, but do go and enjoy the holiday - Thanks for a great read :)

[reighost]

Holy shit! God damn your cliffhangers~! *headdesk* soooo evil! Btw i apologize if i was one of the people 'trolling' you, it wasn't my intention at all, i just really want to see my prompt written! XD Loved this chapter, too much given my reaction to reaching the end... *sigh~!*

[sinnatious]

LOL, by the trolling I was mostly referring to all the requests for fic-universe crossovers. Not a bad thing, but I'm just waiting for someone to say 'we have to go deeper!' and add another layer to the fic-ception. Anyhow, I will hopefully get to a decent chunk of the prompts (looking at the number, no way I'll manage all of them), but I really don't know yet. Fingers crossed!