Fic Posting: Early Bird Special

Jul 28, 2003 06:31

Early Bird Special

Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: PG - 13
Disclaimer: Not mine..not fair, but true :(
Spoilers: for Exodus
Summary: A Friendship of Legend a.k.a. destiny cannot be denied.
Acknowledgements: Thank you so much lolitaluthor for the awesome beta! You rock Lola. And thanks to xandyrd for being there. You know I lubbed yous! *hugs for both ( Read more... )

pairing: clex, ch: sv clark, sv fic, slash, fan fiction, ch: sv lex

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*yum* astrea9562 July 28 2003, 10:03:27 UTC
Delicious! It may be a cliche, but you made it work. I loved the way you portrayed Lex/Warren. Thanks for posting this.

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Re: *yum* sinisterf July 28 2003, 11:21:15 UTC
Woohoo! Thank you so much for commenting! I am glad it worked for you :D

This idea was a sudden plot bunny that I just had to give voice too...and oddly enough it just happened to fit the Cliche fic challenge. It was originally written solely for The Summer Fun one, so I was happy that I could get two birds with one stone. :D

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digitalwave July 28 2003, 10:13:47 UTC
Brandy,

I liked it!

I liked that Lex's amnesia seemed to stem from his soul needing a vacation from his life, his destiny and all of the people who wanted to hurt him. I don't blame him, I'd want to take off when Lionel showed up too.

I also liked that, even with the ring still on, Clark realizes that something is wrong with Lex. And that Lex recognizes Clark as a place of comfort, a safe haven.

I'd love to see what happens next but that's always the sign of a good story.

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sinisterf July 28 2003, 11:25:42 UTC
Yay! She liked it! *does a happy dance* That really does mean a lot to me on this one. This fic really just seemed to come from my heart strangely enough so thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment *hugs*

I am so glad that I was able to impart Lex's souls tiredness. All of the 2nd season I kept finding myself wondering when he was going to crack...so many bad things happening to the poor woobie *hugs lex*

And yay that for the Clark!comfort! I felt that was a huge thing, that even in forgetting everything he was, Lex would still always remember Clark :D I am a hopeless romantic that way.

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digitalwave July 28 2003, 11:47:25 UTC
So, what's it going to take for you to continue it? Would bribes help? *g*

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sinisterf July 28 2003, 11:55:17 UTC
*g* I don't know...I had actually planned more but my muse went it's own way and ended it there.

More is still deffinitly a possibility. I need to finish a few other things 1st though (like that dang iconography challange). But no worry, bribes certainly are not required, as I am sure my muse will eventually provide :D

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goth_clark July 28 2003, 10:49:02 UTC
Oh the possibilities. I really like this outcome. Both of them free to be who they want without any pressure. Very nice.

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sinisterf July 28 2003, 11:27:44 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting Gothgirl! *big sappy random hugs*

I was happy with the outcome too, I just loved the idea that this way they could be together. Like it is meant to happen.

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yavannauk July 28 2003, 11:00:33 UTC
Oooh, I really like the way you have Lex's continuing amnesia being a result of him needing a vacation from all the uncomfortable things that he doesn't want to remember, even though they're on the edge of his memory. And I love the hints you give of Lionel's reaction. This Lex is red!Clark's perfect partner, isn't he? You definitely leave us wanting more with this one.

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sinisterf July 28 2003, 11:31:39 UTC
Woohoo! Another comment *is very happy* Thank you so much for reading and commenting Yavanna! It really does mean a lot to me!

I am glad that the 'vacation' angle on Lex's amnesia worked. I felt that it was something easly understood, with how crazy his life had been recently. Who could blame him for wanting a break right?

And the hints about Lionel, I just had to through those in there. Lex is so identifiable that I just couldn't see how he could go on this way without someone noticing, yet I could see Lionel hiding it, trying to use it ect..cause you know he is the MB :D

And you are completely right! For some reason redk!clark and this Lex do seem to fit. Both without worries, or cares both wanting a new life. It makes a twisted sense.

And damn this is a really long response! Sorry :/

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sinisterf July 28 2003, 22:20:14 UTC
Yay! Thanks for commenting Jodie! I am glad that this worked for you and that you enjoyed it!

And I liked the subtlety of Lionel the shaggy haired business man. He's such a mean bastard, even here.

Hee! He is the MB (magnificent bastard) Gotta love him!

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