Fan Fic: Say No - Young Justice (Cartoon)

May 24, 2011 04:12

Title: Say No
Pairing(s)/Character(s): Bruce Wayne/Dick Grayson
Rating: R
Word Count: 657
Warnings: Underage, frottage.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Acknowledgments: Thank you to ciaan and xandyrd for their assistance in proof reading this work. Any left over mistakes are solely mine.
Note: This fic was written as a fill for the following justice-kinkRead more... )

ch: dick grayson, young justic cartoon fic, fan fiction, pairing: bruce/dick, ch: bruce

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zolac_no_miko May 24 2011, 12:54:14 UTC
Haha, we're in a dark and twisty sort of mood, aren't we?

CONSENT IS SEXY, DICK.

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sinisterf May 24 2011, 17:18:06 UTC
Haha, we're in a dark and twisty sort of mood, aren't we?

You noticed, then (lol)? It seems, lately, that all I can write is scary/creepy stuff. I'm not sure what the deal with that is...

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zolac_no_miko May 24 2011, 20:08:33 UTC
Ha, no, I totally understand. For a while I was on this streak where all of my Batfic was depressing or creepy or both. And I do have a fondness for the dark and twisty, but like... I'm actually a very happy, sunny person, and I had to wonder what people thought of me! XD

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twistedangl11 May 24 2011, 12:56:45 UTC
Hmm...nicely written. Poor Bruce...who can resist Dick? Good job handling Bruce's guilt, but ultimately giving in.

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sinisterf May 24 2011, 17:18:35 UTC
Thank you! I was really hoping that I was able to get Bruce's guilt across appropriately!

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pronker May 24 2011, 14:55:37 UTC
The cave is silent, except for a handful of sounds. The trickling sound of water and the creak of settling workout equipment echo in the darkness. He tries to focus on these common sounds. Tries to ground himself in their predictability. He knows what they mean and when they will happen.

I really liked this part, as Bruce grasps at familiarity as the unfamiliar traps him in a half-hated web. It seems like the whole fic takes place in about a second, wow this is good.

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sinisterf May 24 2011, 17:23:41 UTC
I really liked this part, as Bruce grasps at familiarity as the unfamiliar traps him in a half-hated web. It seems like the whole fic takes place in about a second, wow this is good

Thank you! I had some trouble with that section.. it seemed clunky to me, but it needed to be there so I did as much as I could to smooth it over. I am glad that it worked for you :)

And yeah, as I was writing this, I kept imaging it as being just a snippet of an encounter. A second or two of Bruce's guilt and confusion. I'm really happy this came across!

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aurora_dark May 24 2011, 18:02:14 UTC
I will never not love this fic :)

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sinisterf May 25 2011, 13:12:31 UTC
Yay! *revels in fic!love*

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a_big_apple May 24 2011, 22:46:24 UTC
Mmmm. A determined and wriggly Dickie is the best kind.

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sinisterf May 25 2011, 13:12:43 UTC
I concur! Thank you :)

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