FIC: Make It Better

Aug 07, 2010 18:57

Title: Make it Better
Author: rollwithscene
Pairing: Arthur/Ariadne
Rating: R (scenes of a sexual nature)
Disclaimer: I don't own Inception or the characters.
Comments: This is a response to gaspily 's prompt on inception_kink . Prompt was: She has to kill arthur in a dream for the first time, but the first shot doesn't kill him. She has to shoot him again. They wake ( Read more... )

fanfiction: oneshot, !fanfiction, pairing: arthur/ariadne, rating: r, film: inception

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ackleholic August 7 2010, 23:08:14 UTC
First ever Inception fic read and I loved it. As an Arthur/Ariadne shipper, I was bound to love it, but I really did enjoy it. Good stuff. <3

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singyoutosleep August 7 2010, 23:18:06 UTC
yay! i'm glad you enjoyed your first inception fic, then :)

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singyoutosleep August 7 2010, 23:27:11 UTC
whee. i will probably write more arthur/ariadne stuff.

i just had to make her shoot him in the dick. i just had to. i couldn't help myself.

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irishcookie August 8 2010, 00:25:28 UTC
All I can think is: Holy shit she shot him in the dick!!!! WOW!

The sexytimes make up for that horrifying fact...more than make up for it! Great job!

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singyoutosleep August 8 2010, 00:35:14 UTC
ahahahahahahahaha it was an accident! and it was in the dream world do it didn't really happen.

blame sarah for her open ended prompts. HER FAULT.

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asianprincess61 August 8 2010, 03:09:50 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA OMG

ぎゃははははははは _(_ _)ノ彡☆ばんばん! That really does give a new meaning of "Hurt and Comfort" fic... XD

Good job!

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singyoutosleep August 8 2010, 03:50:35 UTC
i know lolz i can't stop laughing at the mental image.

thank you.

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asianprincess61 August 8 2010, 03:53:12 UTC
Lol you're welcome, but I have to admit the sheer ridiculousness of the "shooting him in the dick" part kinda made it hard to get into the sexy mood towards the end, but it was still pretty damn cute/hott. So good job nonetheless!

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elliesmeow August 9 2010, 00:29:39 UTC
That was hilarious. I'm not sure who I should pity more. Maybe Ariadne, since even after they woke up it was still bothering her.LOL

-Ellie

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