Sins of the Father (7/10)

[singoutloud25]

Title: sins of the Father (7/10)
Author: singoutloud25
Pairing/Character: JunSeung, DooSeob
Rating: R (Swearing and Violence)
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance
Summary:  The lives of these six young men would now forever be changed. They will become what they once feared and hated. They will become violent, dangerous, aggressive, and one will even become a murderer. They

Comments

[lunarebina]

BEST chapter so far!! (i typed BEAST instead of BEST the first time round, LOL!) OMG i cant wait for the next one!! Rain is going DOWN!! BOO!!

[lalaine04]

/cries. OMG. This chapter has sent me whirling into a spiral of emotions. At first I was anxious when Seobie talked with Doojoon about joining their teams. Then I got scared for Doojoon's and Junhyung's team because of what Rain plans to do against them. Then I felt happy knowing that Kikwang and Jiyoon finally got better. But then I got worried for Hyunseung taking the mission alone. Then I was breathless and damn frightened during Hyunseung's whole fight scene. I think my heart stopped a moment because I thought Hyunseung won't get out of that place alive. I felt relieved that he won the fight, but I felt sorry for him knowing that he killed two men against his will. Then my heart was in pain at the scene when Seobie talked with Junhyung and Doojoon together. But eventually I felt glad and relieved that both of the leaders agreed to talk things out with the aim of making their lives better. Then my heart was broken again at the scene of Hyunseung who's clearly in agony. I was thankful Junhyung was with him

[ljhana]

This. was. the. best. chapter. so far. I cried. Everything was just so emotional. Yoseob getting angry and sad and..ugh and Junhyung crying made me cry more. This chapter was so real that I could actually picture everything. The way you wrote everything here made me feel and understand all their pain as if I was involved too. This was just a beautiful chapter ;_;. I'm not good with words or writing so I can't fully express my thoughts on this chapter.
I really really love this story so so much. The friendship, love, everything. ;___; Update soon! Thank you for writing this lovely story.

[mankadi]

Awww bb. I don't have any more words left to describe my feelings for this story. To describe how beautiful, meaningful and well written this Is.
I don't think any words can . Only the sound of my heartbeat <3

[swallow_nest]

When I read the prologue and then the first few chapters I thought the murdered would be someone else and then I read this and I was like... 'wha...what happened?' I won't say I'm some freaking fortuneteller but most of the time I can predict what will happen (after reading a lot you get the hold of things) and for quite some time now no story surprised me this way.

Oh I so want Rain's ass kicked, stupid fucker. (why do I think the last paragraph is about Seobbie?)

Also sorry I haven't commented on the previous chapters... my muse to write comments fails me a lot >.