Sins of the Father (6/10)

[singoutloud25]

Title: Sins of the Father (6/10)
Author: singoutloud25
Pairing/Character: JunSeung, DooSeob, KiWoon, Chansung, Taecyoon, Rain, Shindong, Kangin, Minho, Jiyoon
Rating: R (Violence, Swearing)
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance, Action
Summary: The lives of these six young men would now forever be changed. They will become what they once feared and hated. They will become

Comments

[lalaine04]

Oh gosh, this is becoming increasingly beautiful every chapter.
The fight. Oh gosh I should say that Hyunseung is one heck of a fighter. I should agree with Minho that Seung is the best fighter among Doojoon's men. The way he rendered two men unconscious and took the giant off, just WOW.
For a moment my heart stopped when Kikwang won't wake up even when Seung's slapping him. You don't know how relieved I am when he finally called Seung's name announcing he's fine (if you can even call that fine). And the scene when Kiki/Seung/Doo hugged each other is just.. /cries
The Orig3 scenes at the end.. /sobs. KiWoon and DooSeob are just too lovable together. And JunSeung is angsty. I'm not even surprised. I hope Jun would take Seung's advice and talk to Doojoon. I really want the two groups to reunite and be happy again.
PS. I should be the one thanking you for making this awesome story. You know I'll always wait for your update. I love this fic of yours bb. ^o^v

[singoutloud25]

Thank you for reading and commenting and loving this story bb♥♥♥ I'm really happy that you're loving it ☺ The Kikwang part was difficult to write. I came very close to killing him off, but I just couldn't do it! Thank you again bb!!!

[kattrinray]

I am so in love with this story. You're writing is amazing and you fill every hole. I feel like nothing is left out and everything is written so well.

I hope Hyunseung can convince Junhyung before it's too late. I'm so in love with Dooseob remaining strong through everything <3 I just about cried my eyes out with Kikwang D:

Keep up the wonderful work!

[singoutloud25]

♥♥♥ Thank you for loving this! I was worried that I had too much details and moments so I'm glad that it's working out and that you don't think it's too much. DooSeob were like the Appa and Umma to me in this story. They stuck together through everything, not only cause they loved each other, but because they love everyone else as well. Thank you for reading!!!

[kyuwook13]

that fight. Wooooow, seung is REALLY STRONG wooooooow *still jaw dropped from that fighting scene

[singoutloud25]

*gives you a big hug* I'm sorry that I made you cry, but if it helps any I cried while writing that Kikwang scene too, I honestly thought I was going to kill him off, but I couldn't cause he's Kiki :)

I love KiWoon and I LOVE writing them because they are sooo freaking special!!! JunSeung is always angst, but they are pure love to so it balances out keke

THANK YOU FOR READING!!!

[kyuwook13]

/hugs you/ yeaaah it's okay. yeah because he's Kiki, so he isn't going to die taht easy. Kiki jjang!!
kiwoon is <33 and yep JunSeung is that kind of love /sigh/ but i'm glad that jun is a lil bit concious just hope that he'll accept seungie advice

yeep ^^

[mankadi]

Ahhh how can you make it better and better???
Really I just.....that's too beautiful
I think I'm in love with your writing skills and this plot <3
Thanks for writing such an awesome fic

[singoutloud25]

Thank you soooo much for reading this and liking it♥♥♥

I'm glad that you think it's beautiful cause I do too^^

I went to read your Light in the Darkness fic, but it was locked :( So I will patiently await for you to add me so I can read it :)

Thank you again bb and I hope you continue to enjoy it!!!

[singoutloud25]

*SQUEALS* OMFG THIS IS THE LONGEST COMMENT I HAVE EVER GOTTEN!!!!!

Welcome to the world of my writing and I'm glad that you're liking this♥♥♥

You pretty much nailed each character on the head, well done! Hyunseung, Yoseob, and Kikwang were my favorite characters to write in this story. Being able to write them as soft-hearted but strong, determined, and badass at the same time was a really nice change.

Doojoon and Dongwoon were slightly difficult to write. I'm so used to Dongwoon being happy and upbeat and I could never seem to be completely satisfied with trying to balance the dark/angsty side of Doojoon with his love for everyone.

It nearly killed me to write Junhyung's character. I have no idea why, but I just could not get his emotions and thoughts off accurately like I wanted to, so I'm glad that everyone is liking him.

I personally fell in love with Taemin's character♥

Thank you sooo much for reading this and for liking it!!! The next chapter will be posted soon :)