Sins of the Father (3/10)

[singoutloud25]

Title: Sins of the Father (3/10)
Author: singoutloud25
Pairing: JunSeung, DooSeob, KiWoon
Rating: R
Summary: The lives of these six young men would now forever be changed. They will become what they once feared and hated. They will become violent, dangerous, aggressive, and one will even become a murderer. They will become feared, hated, strong, and powerful. Some

Comments

[mankadi]

Wow every chapter I love this and you eve. More!
I wonder if you know how much this story is amazing
Because it is. Beyond words :)
I really like the chapter. I see the pairing desperation especially junseung.
I like their scene the most because it shows.. How much frustrated they are. How much needy lonely and depressed. But at the same time they missed each other.
No. They NEED each another!
wonderful!
Waiting for more <3

[singoutloud25]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! I'm really glad that you're liking it. Honestly, I do worry that it's not that great of a story so thank you for saying that it is♥

Chapter 4 will be up in a couple days so hang tight keke

[lalaine04]

Wow. This chapter is just so awesome and I love you for this.
Gaah, JunSeung beating up each other and the next second, they were making love. OMG. But I love that part. I really do. I felt their desperation, their longing and need to be with each other and their love. I also understood how their situation affected them and ruined their supposed to be wonderful life together had it not been for their fucked up parents.
JunSeung really is the epitome of angst, since their relationship is the most complicated out of my orig3 in this story. Honestly, I love the angst surrounding JunSeung and the fluff that comes after.
DooSeob, you trolls! I never expected that they're still in contact/in love with each other after everything that happened between their families. I really thought that Seung and Seob were the only ones who were in contact hoping for a change.
And KiWoon! Gah, I love you two for being adorable and cute and perfect.
Oh, please continue this wonderful fic. Can't wait for more. Thank you ^__^v

[singoutloud25]

THANK YOU!!! I'm glad that I was able to get across how I saw JunSeung in this story and that you're able to understand them and feel them. Haha yes DooSeob are trolls and KiWoon was my favorite part to write in this chapter, there's just something very special about them and they are soooo fun to write!!!

They story is actually complete already so I'm just posting the chapters. The next one will be up in a few days :)

[velvet_vietta]

UNNIEEEE~~ hahaha! Hiiiiii
well, so this would be the first time i'm commenting on this fic. and i love it~ OMG, JUNSEUNG! ASDFGHJJKLKJSAGDLLNLKHAH
im so loving the hyunseob interaction in the previous chappie.
and my heart aches a little when they started fighting and melted completely when they were u know.. *blushes*
but, really unnie. this was amazingggg~~^^

[singoutloud25]

HELLO!!!!! Thank you for loving it!!! HyunSeob is my little secret pairing...I've fallen in love with them after I wrote a fic about them and I just really like the relationship that can be created between them.

Ahhh, the JunSeung scene was fun to write, I just hope that people don't think it's rushing.

Thank you for reading!!!

[velvet_vietta]

Of course, they're my secret OTP tooo^^
awwwww, ikr. they're just being them...so cute~~

well, i think it's good! anything about junseung has always been good! /such a hardcore Junseung shipper/

u're welcome =))

[chocolate_ai]

there's a lot of "fuck" word in this chapter... hahaha

[singoutloud25]

...are you referring to the actual word or the deed...haha...but seriously the swearing dies down a lot as the story progresses, it only ends up in certain scenes.

Thank you for reading!!!

[singoutloud25]

*whispers in your ear 'I laughed at the JunSeung part as well'*

I'm really glad that you're loving it!

OMG one of the best fics I've ever read al;sdfjalsjdfajsd THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!