Comments | singerdiva01_sk: BSG Fic: A Berry Merry Spring on Earth (B/S/L)

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BSG Fic: A Berry Merry Spring on Earth (B/S/L)

Apr 30, 2014 11:21

Title: A Berry Merry Spring on Earth
Rating: MA
Word Count: 1697
Pairing: Bill/Saul/Laura
Warnings: Anal
Summary: On happy!Earth, our favorite OT3 go on a picnic and enjoy some of the edible wonders the planet has to offer. (So, basically, fluffy AU PWP!)

( We need an outing so we’re going to have one. )

smut, laura roslin, bsg, pwp, saul tigh, bill adama, bill/saul/laura

Comments 11

plaid_slytherin April 30 2014, 22:03:55 UTC

Eee, this is adorable. I love them all happy and fluffy together. Not to mention this was mindblowingly hot. I'm in awe of your smut-writing skills. I love how you structured it, with Bill watching them and remembering past times when he'd been in her position. That's such a delicious image.

singerdiva01_sk May 1 2014, 01:34:46 UTC

Eeek! Thanks so much. This OT3 happy on AU earth gives me more pleased shivers than any other, I think.

I'm in awe of your smut-writing skills.

OMG, that's what I've always thought about you! So, frak, AMAZING praise indeed!

lanalucy May 1 2014, 01:27:17 UTC

I love the idea of Laura and Saul conspiring together to roofie Bill, only in a good way. That's so devious. :D

singerdiva01_sk May 1 2014, 02:15:55 UTC

I mean, she didn't mean to render him unconscious. He was just supposed to get really hot. Oooops..

lanalucy May 1 2014, 02:28:09 UTC

Well, right. The kind of roofie that makes him superhorny, not supercoma. lol And in berry form. Nature invented it. Therefore, its use is indicated in certain situations. :D

newnumbertwo May 1 2014, 10:33:34 UTC

This is wonderful! I love how you get all three of their personalities in here so perfectly. I especially adore the Laura/Saul dyad here. They're so in tune with one another and their conspiracy with Bill is perfect, sweet, and funny. And it's so hot. ♥

singerdiva01_sk May 5 2014, 20:36:58 UTC

So sorry for the late response but thank you so much! I'm getting really into Laura/Saul interactions so I'm glad it worked and was hot too!

fragrantwoods May 1 2014, 20:44:45 UTC

What a hot, hot OT3, with tons of love and memories (and banter--yummy banter!) This could have been cracky PWP, but Bill's feelings about Laura's cure, and those luscious, lovely memories were so emotionally rich, it just made a beautiful, earthy sweet romp. Saul is so good with both of them here, and the love they all have for each other is palpable.

And the idea of Laura wanting to experience exactly what Bill does (as far as she's able) was just scorching :-) And then Saul knowing Bill and his orgasmic past so well was the icing on the cake. Well-done!

singerdiva01_sk May 5 2014, 20:39:26 UTC

So sorry for the late response but thank you for the comment!

I'm so glad this didn't read as crack because that's where it started and I didn't like it. I actually had much more sappiness that might make it into another fic but this just needed to get to the smut, which I am so glad you liked!

laura_mayfair May 1 2014, 21:22:47 UTC

Damn, this was hot! I think my favorite moment has to be Laura wiggling her bottom at Saul and asking him to frak her like he fraks Bill. It was just unbearably cute in a no-nonsense Laura kind of way. I also really like the way you interposed the current day scene with Bill's memories of other times with Saul. Beyond the steaminess, you also captured the love and respect that these three have for one another.

Really, really awesome!

singerdiva01_sk May 5 2014, 20:40:40 UTC

So sorry for the late response but many thanks for the comment!

I'm so glad the transition between memories and the present worked and I love that you love Laura's playfulness here. Really appreciate the feedback!