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[sinemoras09]

Title: Finding Eden, Part 15
Author: sinemoras09
Characters: Sarah Ellis (Eden)
Rating: R, language, sex, drug use
Word count: 2,270
Total Word Count: 27,073

Parts: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27Summary: Eden falls apart. Sex, drugs, and rehab. Bennet pwns all

Comments

[albion1919]

BENNET FTMFW!!!!!!

I'm so happy that she got arrested, lol. Now she be all clean. I loved that Isaac was in there, I mean they're the two druggies on the show so you'd think they might have met before: Heroes is a small world! XD

she watches his wedding ring gleaming in the sun.

That's so lovely, the symbolism of his shiny marriage :)

Manhattan. She's going to Manhattan.

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABBBBEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! \o/ *bounces*

Ann! Beth posted the start of her 5YG fic!!!

[sinemoras09]

I SAW!!! It was SO GOOD!!!!! I don't know WHAT the hell she was so paranoid about, her writing is crisp and really refined. I WANNA READ MOOOOOORE!!

And yes: Manhattan! FINALLY. lol! XD

[albion1919]

I know right? She's got to be one of the most articulate peeps I've met! She better post more soon!

Ann I can't wait for them to meet! She's working in the bookshop, perfect place *sigh*

[fifmeister]

OMG, you guys, I'm seriously blushing so hard right now! *bounces in seat* ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

YATTA! HELLO NEW YORK!

YAAAAY FINALLY! *skips*

[sinemoras09]

WOO-HOO!!! XD

[fifmeister]

I just love the way you describe things. The little details make it seem so real, like I'm right there with Eden experiencing the situation along with her. I loved the transition from despair at the beginning to hope at the end, and the imagery you used for both. And hooray for an appearance from HRG! He's so made of awesome.

Over 27,000 words! You're more than halfway there! :D

[sinemoras09]

Thank you!! I'm so excited you're actually reading this--this thing is a BEAST, lol....but now Eden and Gabriel are actually going to be interacting, so woo for that XD

[dana_serenity]

Oh great stuff! I love Bennett xD

[sinemoras09]

Me too XD

[chinadollcjo]

Woohoo, Bennet is the master. Dude I saw tonights episode and had unplugged my tv about to throw it out the window!!! I love that you found a way to incorporate the characters by putting them in a rehab/psych unit, very cool. Finally the big apple!! *off to the next chappy

[sinemoras09]

Rehab/psych FTW! \o/ XD What was cool was, I rotated in both places this year, so I didn't have to make stuff up. That was awesome :) :)