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[sinemoras09]

Title: Finding Eden, Part 21
Author: sinemoras09
Characters: Gabden; Eden, Gabriel
Rating: PG-13 version
Word Count: 742

Summary: Gabriel is happy :) Eden/Gabriel.

A/N: Written for the NaNoWriMo challenge (50,000 words in 30 days). Comments/support would be GREATLY appreciated :) :) :)

Comments

[dana_serenity]

This is so so sweet!
Great work hun <3

[sinemoras09]

thanks :)

[albion1919]

*BIG FLUFFY SIGH*

You really do write the best of it!! It's not overly sugary.

I just realized Eden and Gabriel have sex after he talked about his mother. *facepalm* LOL. Oh well. As long as it doesn't come off creepy, right...? *snort*

No, not at all... *cough*Oedipus*cough* XD

Why are you writing them out of order? Haven't you written them meeting yet?

[sinemoras09]

I'm still on Eden in LA, and it's taking a longass time. Meh. Maybe I just won't post the stuff until it's in order....

I have the ending written already *facepalm* lol.

[albion1919]

Well have you written any chaps with LA!Eden? I still wanna read it. (I know peeps have been saying that it's depressing what you've got so far but that just makes what you've written above all the more touching and worthwhile when you get to it. I don't mind waiting for the fluff :))

*is very jealous* I've got the start done, obvs, and I know what the middle will be but I have no idea beyond that. I need to get writing...

[sinemoras09]

I've written the chaps, but it seems forced, so I'm adding more stuff to it. Like, it's not believable to me that she'd just land in LA and start doing drugs/stripping/hooking right away, so yeah. I'm building some things up, and it's just taking a long time to develop :/

I'm writing now! *bounces* w00t :D