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[sinemoras09]

Title: Paradise
Author: sinemoras09
Characters: Eden
Rating: R, violence and non-graphic sex
Word count: 598
Spoilers: Graphic Novel #9

Summary: Eden in LA. Four drabbles.

A/N: Originally this was going to be a multi-chapter fanfic, which I may attempt to write when I have more time.

Comments

[andbless_mybaby]

Very lovely. Short and sweet, just like one of those little cupcakes... kind of makes you want more. I especially liked the descriptions, which were vivid and very lifelike. :)

I enjoyed this. Boo to the trolls.

[sinemoras09]

SQUEEEE I'm so happy you liked it! Especially since you're my fanfic idol, lol :D

*high fives again* XD

[albion1919]

\o/

The rain drips down the eaves of the store fronts, puddles reflecting sunlight like mirrors, a brightness covering the street like a yellow haze[...]She finds a corner and juts her hip out, the bright pink swatch of skirt singing “sex” and so much more.

Great lines. The description of the light and puddles is so pretty.

He has her by the throat and her voice isn’t working. “Let me go!” she says

Murder in Oklahoma?

You know I love the intensity of the club scene.

Oh, and before some random anon comment spams me AGAIN (*eyeroll*)

If some prat can't be brave enough to sign in, don't even bother with them.

[sinemoras09]

Murder in Oklahoma?

Hell yeah XD

OOOH did you post the next chapter to your prossy/menage-a-trois!fic yet?? I have to look on your LJ and check....

[essyllus]

Mmm. It's good. :)

[sinemoras09]

thank you! :)