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[sinemoras09]

Title: An Unexpected Guest, Part 6
Author: sinemoras09
Characters: Peter, Adam/Yaeko
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 877
Spoilers: Season 2
Parts: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8

Summary: Peter uses Sylar's Intuitive Aptitude and discovers the truth about Adam and Hiro. AU, part 6.

Comments

[bellonablack]

AWESOME!!

I love Sylar's power. XD Poor Peter, though, feeling at odds with it. That was handy though. Because I don't know if Peter would have figured it out for awhile. But what happened? Is it that he's risking being hurt...or that he will be hurt eventually do to his lifespan? Or does he feel not worthy?

Sending her back to Hiro will just start things up again...wow. Self-infliction is inflicting.

And is he still planning destruction? Oh Adam, say it isn't so.
-BB

[sinemoras09]

THANK YOU!! XD XD

Yup, Adam's still planning on releasing the virus, but since it'll kill Yaeko he has to send her away. He loves her too much to risk killing her, so he's hoping Peter will just erase everything and ship her back; he's counting on Hiro to do The Right Thing and send her back to Otsu instead of jeopardizing the timeline by keeping her here.

I think I can finish this off in one more chapter \o/ But now I have to go to the library. *waves* Byee! XD

[bellonablack]

Oh, I see. :-)

He's a good guy about to do a v. bad thing then. XD And Hiro to be the better man...I like this, this is a new side to his character. Or rather a more in-depth side to his character.

Yatta. XD

Good luck with the books.

-BB

[sinemoras09]

Thank you!!

LOL the studying...went not so well XD I ended up at my friend's place playing Halo and manning the headset (it's this huge joke we have--my friend is REALLY good at Halo, so I sit on the headset and smack talk everyone with my girly!girl voice XD LOL!

[iluvspaghetti]

Phasing through the door, he steps into the bedroom and finds the two of them sleeping in each other's arms, entirely unaware of the watery light filling the room.

awww at them sleeping all cuddled up like that ^_^ adam would love having someone to cuddle (esp. after all that time locked up -_-;)

great chapter! i think this is my favorite one!

[sinemoras09]

Thank you!! Yeah, I like to think that Adam would like to cuddle ;) *cough*MarySue*cough* XD Stupid Hiro, messing things up....

[forsquilis]

Just so you know...I went and recced this at TWoP...and then realized you have the whole thing flocked. WHYYYYYYYY???? (I still have it recced. I am hoping to shame you into unlocking it...) :P

[sinemoras09]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU RECC'D THIS????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*runs around in circles*

I was keeping it locked cuz it's a WIP and I keep moving things around between chapters. I'll unlock it now though!! *dances*

w00t!!

ETA: okay, it's unlocked, I proofread like mad and I actually added a whole section to the end of Part 5 that I had edited out originally, but yeah, it's unlocked now \o/ W00t!

[forsquilis]

I;m not into any of these three characters but I've really enjoyed reading it. And there are frequent posts from people at TWoP asking for good gen fic, so I figured they should be told about this one. Only after I came back to leave a comment for you, did I realize it was flocked... *facepalms*

I updated my post at TWoP to tell them it's unlocked now. Hopefully some people will stop by!!!

[sinemoras09]

Squeeeee thank you!!!!! Seriously I thought this fic was kinda iffy, which was one of the reasons why I kept it locked, but yeah! Even if no one else reads this, I'm super flattered that you liked my dumb little fic enough to REC IT ON TWOP OMG SQUEEEEEEEE!!!

Thank you! Seriously, thank you!!

*glomps*

[albion1919]

I like the way you write Peter, that empathy is something I‘ve always liked; he's just trying to do what he thinks is best. does he have amnesia in this? He mentioned Nathan.

Awww man, I can't wait to see what will happen!

[sinemoras09]

Eee! Thank you so much! I know I make fun of Peter a lot, but I really like him, I think IRL he'd be a sweet guy :)

The whole Oirish!amnesia!storyline never took place: remember in "Four Months Ago" when Elle and The Haitian chase after Adam and Peter? Well the Haitian doesn't pwn peter in this, Peter somehow manages to escape with Adam to Montreal :)

[albion1919]

I agree, even if the writers make him "dumb" unfairly.

Ahh gothcha!

[sinemoras09]

Oh wow, thank you so much!! LOL yeah, I was telling Squills that I thought this was kind of cracky, so I was keeping it f-locked, so I'm really glad you liked it! I love Adam, he's one of my favorite characters on the show, and Yaeko had SO MUCH potential to be kickass...thank you so much for reading! You've totally made my day!! :)

[sinemoras09]

omg, are you serious??? :D :D :D

I know squills said she rec'd Cougar over there...I didn't realize how many other fic were rec'd! Wow!! I'm so totally flattered, I just write for fun and I'm so glad people like my stuff!!

Thank you so much for leaving such wonderful feedback! I'm totally grinning right now! *glomp*

XD