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May 31, 2008 19:42

Title: An Unexpected Guest, Part 1
Author: sinemoras09
Characters: Peter, Adam, Yaeko
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1,338
Spoilers: Season 2
Parts: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8

Summary: AU. Peter accidentally takes Yaeko back into the future. Takes place immediately after "Four Months Ago." Written for un_love_you prompt #1, "You were right about me."

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adam monroe, an unexpected guest, peter petrelli, yaeko, fanfic, adam/yaeko, fandom: heroes, personal favorite, challenge: un-love-you

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bellonablack June 1 2008, 04:51:15 UTC
Yaeko. Kicks. Butt.

SO much love, I love Adam's vulnerability in this piece. It shows alot that he would want to save her and not take the easy route of letting her go to avoid the questions.

-BB

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sinemoras09 June 1 2008, 11:19:28 UTC
Squee! Thank you!! I'm taking a page from your book and doing the multi-chapter route. We'll see how that goes *shifty eyes* LOL XD

<3

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bellonablack June 2 2008, 00:20:30 UTC
Heh, well, I think you're actually going to finish your chaptered fic ;-) LOL. I love long chaptered fics from you, like I like the short ones too! XD

Can't lose.

-BB

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sinemoras09 June 2 2008, 19:29:04 UTC
Aww, thanks doll :) Yeah we'll see if I actually finish this. I'm on-call tonight, so I definitely won't have time to work on this today. Stupid med school, interfering with my fanfic! XD LOL :) :)

<3

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albion1919 June 1 2008, 10:43:35 UTC
Go Yaeko!!! \o/

I'm confused about Peter's ability, are saying that he can detect emotion in others? I thought it was only powers he could absorb? Also where are they?

"I trusted him; I thought he was someone he was not."

Lots of women get betrayed on this show dude :\ Bloody men :P

Looking forward to more! Also yay for multi chapters!

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sinemoras09 June 1 2008, 11:18:38 UTC
w00t!

Yeah, this actually came from your Yaeko-on-her-deathbed thing. I'll keep that first draft for sometime later :) :)

I'm confused about Peter's ability, are saying that he can detect emotion in others? I thought it was only powers he could absorb? Also where are they?

I think it's a combination of using Matt's mind reading and Peter just being a sensitive guy. I think Matt read emotions in addition to hearing other people's thoughts, and I think Peter's natural empathy (not the empathic mimicry, just him being sensitive) augments that. I think Adam was so distressed that Peter couldn't help *not* feel it. The quip about "Empath, remember," was just a joke (empath, empathy, Peter is a w00b, etc. :)

Also where are they?

I actually cut out some of the exposition and sticking it in the 2nd chapter. You'll see :)

ETA: I can't spell *facepalm*

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albion1919 June 1 2008, 11:27:39 UTC
\o/ looking forward to that, oh the angst!

*nods* I get it now. Can you imagine if he actually met someone who's power it was to feel other's emotions? Oh damn he'd cry more then Claire and Maya :P

Ok then! :)

lol join the club :P

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sinemoras09 June 1 2008, 12:19:32 UTC
Oh damn he'd cry more then Claire and Maya :P

LOL I think he already does!! XD (off-camera, of course :P)

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iluvspaghetti June 1 2008, 11:47:33 UTC
It wasn't like absorbing an ability, though," Peter says. "It was like I suddenly understood, you know? Like my mind just clicked. Everything just made sense...."

"Intuitive aptitude," Adam says.

"I guess," Peter says.

Adam knocks his head against the wall. "Christ," Adam says. "Well as long as you don't become psychotic, I guess we'll be okay."

lol! obscure sylar reference ftw \o/

i loved it! i can't wait to see where this goes!! ^_^

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sinemoras09 June 1 2008, 11:48:36 UTC
LOL!! Thank you!! Yeah I'm glad someone caught that. I'm finding out Peter is A LOT of fun to play with--he's like a canon Mary Sue. Haha XD

Thanks for reading! There's more to come, soon :)

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razycrandomgirl June 1 2008, 22:30:23 UTC
frowns!* YOU GAVE PETER GABRIEL'S POWER!

... *runs off*

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sinemoras09 June 1 2008, 23:09:48 UTC
Yo man, he's an empath! He has EVERYONE'S power!! lol :)

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razycrandomgirl June 1 2008, 23:31:32 UTC
I hate peter. *pouts*

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sinemoras09 June 1 2008, 23:32:15 UTC
I LOVE PETER!!!!! \o/

omg now no one's gonna read my crap now *sob* XD

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cherazz July 2 2008, 07:07:33 UTC
Yippee! I really enjoyed this first part =) I'm looking forward to reading this!

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sinemoras09 July 2 2008, 11:14:55 UTC
thank you!! I hope you like the rest of it!! :D

cheers!

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