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sindee1982

Chapter Nine: All's Well that Ends Well

Mar 14, 2008 22:15

Let's hear if for an early post tonight! I'm feeling kinda listless and am gonna turn in early for once. Okay, so to recap: Two more chapters after this! *on the edge of my seat* What can you expect to find out in this chapter? Well, the rite gets completed for one; then there's the whole issue with who will be left standing. Ooh, and then there's ( Read more... )

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CHEERS TO THE EARLY POST!!! eyedahoe4u2 March 15 2008, 04:16:21 UTC

Girl you did it to me again... I had to SPEED READ through this chapter I wanted to know what happened in the end so bad!!! Again you take the QoC title away and just have the QoK left in your sight... SOON... VERY SOON!!! LOVED IT Cindy... Bring on Tuesday... YBTB Angie...

Re: CHEERS TO THE EARLY POST!!! sindee1982 March 15 2008, 04:20:04 UTC

Sweet! I'm gearing up to take th Qok title, so look out! ;)

Gut wrenching..pun intended deepest_dark March 15 2008, 07:54:31 UTC

Powerfully written,the description of the ritual itself, Mike stabbing Henry etc, actually made me feel horrified and physically sick.

Re: Gut wrenching..pun intended sindee1982 March 15 2008, 20:49:41 UTC

*in soothing tone* Alright, I know that that scene was kinda...uh, well horrific, but I did it to illustrate that M&H's attitude towards one another has changed; Henry trusted him enough to do that, and Mike, for all his posturing of wanting to kill Henry/saying he can't stand him, almost choked when he had the chance. That's all part of the plan--everything will get smoothed over in this fic, including their little squabbles, so to speak. Plus I also wanted to show just how much Henry loves Vicki to willingly go through with that---again. Sorry for making you feel sick--if its any consolation, I felt a little queasy while writing it, but it makes for good drama, eh?

Re: Gut wrenching..pun intended deepest_dark March 16 2008, 10:40:06 UTC

No no, don't apologise for making me feel sick it was wonderful!!! LOL.. It's the fact that Mike almost choked doing it that made me FEEL so sick as well as the actual physical stabbing.What they are all going through is endless hell.
Fantastic writing!

neeceera March 15 2008, 08:16:10 UTC

Oh crap not again. You stopped the story before we could find out if Henry was OK. I know he will be not even you are that evil, that you would kill him off. I'll be sitting in front of my computer for two days waiting for the next chapter. Denise

deepest_dark March 15 2008, 10:40:20 UTC

LOL i noticed she keeps doing that too..very very cruel!!!

sindee1982 March 15 2008, 20:52:50 UTC

Thanx, and no, I'm not that evil ;) Oh man, that would be DIABOLICAL to do that!! *shudders*

cjm86 March 15 2008, 08:49:14 UTC

Last story of yours I read was Love Portion #9 last month, I will never do something that stupid again. I was once again hook on both stories. I just can't wait to read Chapter 10!

sindee1982 March 15 2008, 20:54:20 UTC

Wow, thanx! Hooked, eh? I like it :)

skittellgirl March 15 2008, 14:07:44 UTC

Can't wait til the next chapter!

sindee1982 March 15 2008, 20:54:44 UTC

TY! It's a comin'! :)