I finally had some energy to actually read too, not only drool over your gorgeous imagery... And wow, I really like your writing and storytelling style! The pictures are, of course, once again fantastic (no surprise here). I'm so in love with your sets and building skills and couldn't help but stare Jasmine's cuteness as always ;) She's just so cute! I really have to put her in my game as soon as possible.
Thank you so much! It's just a tiny secret, but your pics has been a great inspiration for me. I've always loved your game style and I think it influences my images a little, honestly. :)
Amazing chapter Mela, as always. I get what you mean about transitionary, but I didn't feel anything was out of place, or awkward.
I'm so amazed that Willow is such a hot item! lol. Adrian wants her, Gabriel wants her, lol, and she has no idea. Well, I suppose she knows with Gabriel a bit, he did kiss her.
Also, I'm confused about the...good vs bad...sides thing now. I assumed Miss Cordial was good, but she had a green aura, and now her sister has a blue aura, but works with the Circle, who Clara is part of - who has a green aura - and they want to take things from Willow, who has a blue aura...lol. I can't wait to read more so I can put some more pieces in to my puzzle, lol :D
"Not a lot happens"? I thought this chapter was pretty exciting! Honest! I was totally holding my breath when Garret said "Miss Cordial", lol. Silly me, I forgot about the next-of-kin Luis said earlier on. X)
I.. have so many things to say while reading the chapter, but as I'm typing now, I can't remember them all. :(
I was rather surprised myself that Willow used her magic to trip that jerk. And I'm surprised Rowan said that too, how... accurate of him.
And I'm kinda glad that Wesley and Clara didn't exactly have a pleasant working relationship. I'm hoping they fall out with each other soon, whatever the pact was. :)
Rowan is awesome at looking out for his lil' sister. Makes me wanna go "awwww" despite the mohawk... or maybe because of it XD
I've been thinking this since the first time we saw him, but Adrian looks so young compared to the rest of the uni kids! I'd think he was still in high school, honestly. Nothing wrong with baby-faces, of course, it's probably what reels in the girls, eh? XD
I feel ya on those transitory chapters, but I didn't feel anything awkward about this chapter either. Then again, since I don't know what happens later, I wouldn't be able to tell what in here is meant to play a role later and what is just filler, yanno? Anyway, your dialogue is so natural and lively that it makes the whole thing flow effortlessly. My two cents :)
Yeah, beneath it all, Rowan's just a sweetie at heart. ;) And Adrian does have a baby face you're right about that. Though the funny thing is that he looked absolutely god awful as a child. He grew into his face well though (I think) without the help of plastic surgery or anything like that. I'll post pics in my own outtake post soonish.
I appreciate what you commented about the dialogue. I've intentionally made it that dialogue and pictures would tell most of the story so it's important to me that all of that works as well as it could. :)
You can't see most of the images? Oh that sucks. I know there are a lot of pics there, so sometimes you have to wait for them to all load. And of course, LJ has been having it's own problems lately. :(
Anyway, I hope you read this again when you can see all the pics. Like they say on the internet, this story is worthless without them.
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Can't wait to see and read more!
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I'm so amazed that Willow is such a hot item! lol. Adrian wants her, Gabriel wants her, lol, and she has no idea. Well, I suppose she knows with Gabriel a bit, he did kiss her.
Also, I'm confused about the...good vs bad...sides thing now. I assumed Miss Cordial was good, but she had a green aura, and now her sister has a blue aura, but works with the Circle, who Clara is part of - who has a green aura - and they want to take things from Willow, who has a blue aura...lol. I can't wait to read more so I can put some more pieces in to my puzzle, lol :D
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Yep, Willow is a little clueless about the boys who like her. ;)
As for the witches, the only thing I will say is that Clara is not a part of the Circle. Everything else will be revealed in time!
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I.. have so many things to say while reading the chapter, but as I'm typing now, I can't remember them all. :(
I was rather surprised myself that Willow used her magic to trip that jerk. And I'm surprised Rowan said that too, how... accurate of him.
And I'm kinda glad that Wesley and Clara didn't exactly have a pleasant working relationship. I'm hoping they fall out with each other soon, whatever the pact was. :)
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Rowan really does care about his sister. He may not be the most shining member of the community but he does think Willow should be better than him. :)
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I've been thinking this since the first time we saw him, but Adrian looks so young compared to the rest of the uni kids! I'd think he was still in high school, honestly. Nothing wrong with baby-faces, of course, it's probably what reels in the girls, eh? XD
I feel ya on those transitory chapters, but I didn't feel anything awkward about this chapter either. Then again, since I don't know what happens later, I wouldn't be able to tell what in here is meant to play a role later and what is just filler, yanno? Anyway, your dialogue is so natural and lively that it makes the whole thing flow effortlessly. My two cents :)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I appreciate what you commented about the dialogue. I've intentionally made it that dialogue and pictures would tell most of the story so it's important to me that all of that works as well as it could. :)
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Anyway, I hope you read this again when you can see all the pics. Like they say on the internet, this story is worthless without them.
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