I actually had to stop reading for a while because Carl and his Phyllis made me laugh so much. I think it was a good chapter, nothing to be ashamed of.
Great chapter as always, Mela! You always do such a good job of making these normally boring expository chapters really interesting (also, squee, Cecilia!)
I really, really liked the graphic match (is it okay to use film terms in a sims story?) between the construct and Willow. You kind of do it at the beginning between Willow and Jasmine, and it's really neat to see shots planned out that well.
Gosh, I hope Adrian doesn't be a dork and leave Jasmine. I really like them together, but that's one of those relationships that you can see not working out. Jasmine is too stubborn and Adrian seems like he's too wishy-washy, but they're just sooo cuuuute together. Think of the pretty babies!
It's the same with Gabriel and Willow. Though they seem perfectly complimentary to each other, I can see their differences (not to mention Willows problems right now) completely throwing the whole relationship. Maybe it's just me, though.
I think it's okay to use film terms in a story. When I actually think of it, I like to stage like a film storyboard, so I'm glad you can appreciate those things too. :D
Adrian, Jasmine, Willow and Gabriel will definitely sort out their relationship issues someway or the other. You're right about them though, is all I'll say.
Cecilias dream about the winter cemetary speaks to my gothic heart like you wouldn't believe. Oh gosh, that scenery was wonderful! I love how they are all dragged into this adventure and get to discover different things on their own. It's so well done, so well thought out.
Also, Jasmine and Adrian - YEEEES! More sex to the people!
Thank you! I loved shooting the scene in the graveyard. I had the pics for a while, and me also being a goth at heart had been anxious to do something like this for a while. ^_^
So happy you liked Jasmine and Adrian's scene. I have to admit I love them together.
The detail you go into astounds me. Actually making or finding blueprint cc? AMAZING.
While I want Willow to be rescued, and I can see Wesley doing something stupid to save her, I kind of don't want her to be rescued. It would just be different to the usual way of stories and I'm a sucker for that sort of stuff. XD
That piece of CC has been in my game forever. I'm not 100% certain, but I think it came from one of Simgaroop's lots. It was a logical choice to use, otherwise I'd have thought of something else.
As for Willow, it *might* be possible that no-one comes to her rescue if that's what you meant. But she will have to find a way out of this situation somehow. I actually havent't refined that part yet, but we'll see how it goes. ;) Thank you for the comment!
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I really, really liked the graphic match (is it okay to use film terms in a sims story?) between the construct and Willow. You kind of do it at the beginning between Willow and Jasmine, and it's really neat to see shots planned out that well.
Gosh, I hope Adrian doesn't be a dork and leave Jasmine. I really like them together, but that's one of those relationships that you can see not working out. Jasmine is too stubborn and Adrian seems like he's too wishy-washy, but they're just sooo cuuuute together. Think of the pretty babies!
It's the same with Gabriel and Willow. Though they seem perfectly complimentary to each other, I can see their differences (not to mention Willows problems right now) completely throwing the whole relationship. Maybe it's just me, though.
Also, Malcolm Landgraab just skeeves me out.
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Adrian, Jasmine, Willow and Gabriel will definitely sort out their relationship issues someway or the other. You're right about them though, is all I'll say.
And Malcolm is skeevy! ;)
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LOL! Eee, Nightmare on Elm Street 5... I don't know if that's good or bad. I mean, I love the Series, but 5 wasnt my favourite.... >_<
Carl is always fun to write.. Too bad his crush on Cecilia is a bit artificial. And trust me, her cousin's "evidence is pretty solid.
Hopefully the next few chapters will answer some questions. Thank you for the comment!
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I love how they are all dragged into this adventure and get to discover different things on their own. It's so well done, so well thought out.
Also, Jasmine and Adrian - YEEEES! More sex to the people!
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Thank you! I loved shooting the scene in the graveyard. I had the pics for a while, and me also being a goth at heart had been anxious to do something like this for a while. ^_^
So happy you liked Jasmine and Adrian's scene. I have to admit I love them together.
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While I want Willow to be rescued, and I can see Wesley doing something stupid to save her, I kind of don't want her to be rescued. It would just be different to the usual way of stories and I'm a sucker for that sort of stuff. XD
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That piece of CC has been in my game forever. I'm not 100% certain, but I think it came from one of Simgaroop's lots. It was a logical choice to use, otherwise I'd have thought of something else.
As for Willow, it *might* be possible that no-one comes to her rescue if that's what you meant. But she will have to find a way out of this situation somehow. I actually havent't refined that part yet, but we'll see how it goes. ;) Thank you for the comment!
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