ELLIE!!!!! And Oh noes! Leah! Don't let go! But her little diary in the previous part was so cute, kitty! XD And the cupcake business, well smart little cookies that bunch, I'm so glad they weren't recognized! And the 'travel' scene with the railway was really well done! Great double chapter! I loved it, it was so awesome seeing the Blooms again! :D ♥
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OMG! They were so cute when they disguised themselves! <3 OH NOES, WHAT WILL HAPPEN! Me no first :( xD
Anyway, CALEB!!! :O Lol. I don't know why, when there's two parts, I can't remember what I wanted to comment on the first one D: Ugh!
I like Leah's diary! <3 =]
Don't leave us with a cliff for another month!! :P ._.
Great chapter, I just can't remember what to say o.O
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I thought you'd like the disguising scene.
Sorry about the two parts...I really didn't want to D: Yeah we saw Caleb for a bit, that was totally not planned until they made the stand ;)
Aww, another chapter will be out soon! As soon as my game cooperates for more than 10 minutes. I think I have a pretty simple solution though.
Thanks so much Lila :)
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Yes, Aqua may be sassy child, but she does know her way around being a run-a-way. It was so much fun to disguise them :P
Thanks so much, Ray! That mean a lot :)
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Either way, REALLY GOOD CHAPTER!!
Glad you're back! :)
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I'm glad the kids have managed to survive, but I don't like the path Aqua is taking them down. I don't want them to grow up to be criminals! :(
Needless to say, I love the name of their cupcake company, ha ha~! I'm so flattered~
I miss Ellie. :(
Great chapter~! So glad to see you back! :3
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Aqua is just...dominant. She doesn't mean any harm. But the criminal part is just a way to survive.
Thanks and you're welcome :P
I don't think we're going to see Ellie anymore :( But we'll sure hear about her ;)
Thanks so much! And thanks for commenting!
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