Great chapter :) Though I hate you got that song stuck in my head!! For years I used to go around randomly singing that for no freaking reason & now you started it up again! IMA SUE U! lololol jkjk
OMG great chapter!! Ellie is amazingly beautiful as a YA! Can't wait for the plot line! Oh and with the fish, I liked that, I'm not the only random person xD But the again I didn't think that was too random, its really interesting :) Can't wait for more!!!
Thank you! For some reason the youngest child is always the best looking in my games :P LOL the fish was totally random, it was just sitting there, in the middle of the story :P
Ellie's a young adult already? She's still pretty, as always. Man, how time flies... *gets nostalgic* And I took about four months to write gen 3, with gen 4 looking like it will be even longer! So you're in good company. :P
And eek! Caleb~! I like that he kept his tattoos, ha ha~! Although the title is worrying - they're going to have trouble, I can tell. D:
Great chapter~! Ah, I'm so excited to see where Ellie's story goes! <3
Aww if you ever feel too nostalgic you can take a look at the old chapters. Ellie was the star ever since she was born ;) I'm glad that I'm in good company... I felt very slow when I looked back at the first chapter :P
I'm so glad Caleb is here. His tattoos are part of him, and I thought he could keep his Ink-ish charm (gotta admit he looks ink-ish) bu giving him Sol's hair!
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm already 1/2 way done with the next chapter! :)
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I like Caleb right now but your ominous title of "Nothing good ever lasts" does not sound encouraging. O-o
Can't wait for more! :DDDDD
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I want you guys to like Caleb :) I went for the "innocent" look for him, he had a bad past :/ It was a pretty ominous title... :P
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But besides that, join the random club!
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And eek! Caleb~! I like that he kept his tattoos, ha ha~! Although the title is worrying - they're going to have trouble, I can tell. D:
Great chapter~! Ah, I'm so excited to see where Ellie's story goes! <3
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I'm so glad Caleb is here. His tattoos are part of him, and I thought he could keep his Ink-ish charm (gotta admit he looks ink-ish) bu giving him Sol's hair!
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm already 1/2 way done with the next chapter! :)
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