SV Fic: still waiting on better angels

May 03, 2009 11:09

It’s wrong doing this, so very wrong, yet they are regardless. His lips are demanding and she wants this as much as he needs it. chloe/clark. nc17. 2194 words. post finale.

notes: this is the wrong!Chlark!smut I mentioned yesterday; be gentle. lapiccolina says it's not wrong!Chlark!smut, just Chlark!smut.

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fic: chlark, fic: smallville

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lapiccolina May 3 2009, 18:34:00 UTC
If this is so wrong - I'm a very incorrect person. LOL. I don't even know that made sense.

It was good!

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simplytoopretty May 3 2009, 22:01:44 UTC
Thanks!

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butifulyletdown May 3 2009, 18:49:28 UTC
Damn Mel!

This is so sad. So very sad. Great work on this. It's so poignant and so very heartbreaking. You do angst well :)

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simplytoopretty May 3 2009, 22:02:09 UTC
I do love my angst. I do admit this :)

Thanks for commenting!

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legendarytobes May 3 2009, 19:45:15 UTC
It is wrong. I can see it. But she loves both of them.

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simplytoopretty May 3 2009, 22:02:50 UTC
I do think Chloe loves both, but loves them in different ways. (So I guess I do see her saying it's all about Clark as a bit of lying to herself.)

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chaliebrown363 May 3 2009, 19:46:15 UTC
I wouldn't call this wrong, or maybe i'm just wrong and don't know it. This was so very sad, but it really poetic and I loved the flow of it.

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simplytoopretty May 3 2009, 22:03:25 UTC
I seem to be the only one who thinks it's wrong!smut :) It probably says something about me!

Thanks for commenting!

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firebunny May 3 2009, 19:51:02 UTC
Nothing wrong here.

The fic was full of S, sweet, sexy, soulful, sad.

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simplytoopretty May 3 2009, 22:03:48 UTC
I like having a fic full of S!

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