LJ Idol: Week 2

[simplyn2deep]

This has been A WEEK!

Written for Week 2 at therealljidol. The prompt is "What Really Matters". And... I doubled my word count from the last time. Heck yeah! 400 words.

Set in the same time as Black Rainbow.

Doesn't Really Matter"What really matters," Danny began, "is what others have to say doesn't really matter

Comments

[baxaphobia]

Fun entry!

[sharpiesgal]

Nice.

Love how Danny gets Steve to see his point of view.

[roina_arwen]

The McGarrett comment made me giggle. Nicely done!

[drippedonpaper]

That's a great way to twist the prompt that I did not think of...what doesn't matter.

Great job. I am glad you are continuing the story. You have me wondering what will happen next week :)

[beautyofgrey]

The soldier/sailor bit made me LOL - of course, I want them to win against the land developers, because who isn't tired of developers mucking up nature and the history of things?