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k-pop; you and i make paradise

Jul 02, 2015 15:31

Title: You and I Make Paradise
Pairing: Chanyeol/Jongin
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Maui is beautiful, but Chanyeol thinks it might be Jongin that makes it even more so.
Author’s Note: AU. 8815 words. Everything I know about Hawaii I learned from here, so I apologize for any potential errors. This was sort of inspired by
this @chankaiprompts tweet and ( Read more... )

type: fanfiction, genre: fluff, r: nc-17, g: exo, p: kai/chanyeol

Comments 23

aliquidinovi July 3 2015, 13:23:56 UTC

Oh my God that was so cute and amazing! I was smiling for entire time while i was reading!
Awww so sweet I can't!
Thank you for writing this! ♥

tatoeba July 13 2015, 14:36:04 UTC

ajlkl;sg thank YOU for reading and commenting!! i'm glad you enjoyed it! :D ♥

pikachancalok July 3 2015, 21:58:43 UTC

Im glad you turned this into honeymoon fic because /husbands/ oh goddddd

I love everything about this. So sweet and loving and very laid-back. Makes me want to have vacation too.

Thanks for writing!

tatoeba July 13 2015, 14:37:44 UTC

ahhh i'm really glad the laid-back vibe came through which is what i was hoping for!! and husbands!! i couldn't pass up that idea i'm glad u enjoyed that. thank you for reading and commenting, i'm happy you liked this! ♥ ♥ :D

anonymous July 4 2015, 05:27:07 UTC

really really enjoy this fluffy story
just imagine them calling each other husband would make me rolling on the bed... what a sweet honeymoon

and having sex in public is... wow!!! how dare you guys! hahaha

would love to read more about their lives after changing to a bigger apartment
please make it a sequel

tatoeba July 13 2015, 14:39:09 UTC

haha they were definitely bold with the public sex ;D clearly just high off the whole newlyweds vibe ;D

i hadn't considered a sequel but who knows maybe i'll revisit this verse later~ thank you for reading and commenting, i'm glad you enjoyed it! :D :D ♥

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tatoeba July 13 2015, 14:39:29 UTC

a;lskdga thank YOU for reading and commenting!! i'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D ♥

singilu July 5 2015, 19:01:20 UTC

THIS WAS WONDERFUL I WANT TO GO ON A VACATION RIGHT NOW BUT W/O THIS WAS WONDERFUL.

also omg shameless chankai in public!

tatoeba July 13 2015, 15:09:27 UTC

heh they were totally shameless ;D i'm glad u enjoyed this alex~~ thank you so much for reading and commenting!! :D :D ♥