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fic; break the ice

Sep 29, 2010 22:37

Title: Break the ice
Pairing: Ryo/Yamapi/Jin/Shige
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Shige isn’t sure how he got roped into being here, sitting next to Ryo across from Yamapi and Jin at an overly noisy club downing shots.
Author’s Note: 4222 words. Inspired by the fact that Jin went to a NEWS concert on the 27th, but it’s mostly just an excuse to write this ( Read more... )

p: ryo/shige, p: ryo/yamapi/jin/shige, genre: pwp, p: yamapi/jin, r: nc-17, p: jin/shige

Comments 52

ryogrande September 30 2010, 03:48:58 UTC

OH MY FUCK YES.

I AM CLAIMING THIS AS MY BIRTHDAY PRESENT, OKAY. YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO HAS BEEN WANTING THIS FOURSOME FOR YEARS.

I LOVE YOU. A LOT.

rocking down against him like it’s his sole purpose in life

AS IT SHOULD BE.

JFC RIHA. YOU BROKE ME.

JIN. SHIGE. SNARKING. RYO. YAMAPI. UM. PIN AND RYOSHIGE. RYOSHIGEPIN. LKAJSLDKASJDLASKJDAS.

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tatoeba October 3 2010, 01:02:57 UTC

a;slkgdna;sg LOL I'm already writing you Pin for your birthday. XD But you can have this too if you really want. XD

And no being broken! *fixes you* XD

This comment has had me grinning so hard for days. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. Thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy you liked it, Crys! ♥♥♥

lineelu2001 September 30 2010, 04:57:45 UTC

“God, that’s hot," <-- I AGREE SFM.

*A* I was anxious to make any funny noise while reading this because I'm sitting at my Department's hallway but this is SERIOUSLY HOT!

Thank you for the fic!!!

tatoeba October 3 2010, 01:04:54 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it, sweetie! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D ♥

chynn23 September 30 2010, 07:32:00 UTC

YES! I'M HAPPY RIGHT NOW BECAUSE OF THIS!

but will read later~ *saving*

THANKS RIHA!♥

chynn23 October 1 2010, 06:49:31 UTC

HOPTNESS OVERLOAD! O____O
*incoherent comment insert here*

tatoeba October 3 2010, 01:05:17 UTC

Haha, I'm glad you liked it, dear! Thanks for reading and commenting! :D ♥

je_sugoi_suki September 30 2010, 09:10:23 UTC

LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE~!!

Holy crap. This is too amazing.

I died a thousand times! And if there's a sequal (or just another smutty foursome fic with these men) I will die a thousand more times!

I love JinxShige here, its just too awesome~

Thanks for sharing~!!

tatoeba October 3 2010, 01:07:33 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ♥ :3

zheinpathos September 30 2010, 09:14:55 UTC

OMG THIS FOURSOME!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS OMGOMGOMG *spaz*

Um, I second what Crys said. *__________*

tatoeba October 3 2010, 01:10:46 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D ♥