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Fic: The Moments to Forever (4/?)

Apr 10, 2011 01:08

Title: The Moments to Forever
Author: simply_aly
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Sylar/Claire
Rating: PG
Word Count: 773
Summary: He finds her on the roof
Previous Chapters: 1 2 3

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character: sylar, character: claire bennet, art: fanfiction, pairing: sylar/claire, tv show: heroes

Comments 10

1bill_sookie April 10 2011, 18:31:53 UTC

Great chapter.

simply_aly April 10 2011, 19:30:17 UTC

Thanks!

sylar and claire's interaction devon380black April 10 2011, 19:10:59 UTC

“Do you ever wonder what it would have been like, if my plan had succeeded all those years ago? Do you think the world would have ever accepted us?” she asks that night.

I love their interaction here because I think they would eventually be like this if ever they did end up in the series...they could both talk about existential stuff while being immortals nonetheless...

Love the slow build up of their relationship... :)

Re: sylar and claire's interaction simply_aly April 10 2011, 19:34:48 UTC

I totally agree. I think that, given a long, long time apart, Claire (I think Sylar's already picked up on this) would realize that Sylar is the only person in the world who would understand her because he's the only other person (that she knows) who is immortal.

And I'm glad you approve of the slow build up. It makes more sense to me that they need to take it slow than that they would just fall in love after 100 years.

aikenichi11 April 12 2011, 04:33:04 UTC

Hmmm, very new to this fandom, this is the first fic I've read in it. I have to say I'm off to a good start.

simply_aly April 13 2011, 01:08:30 UTC

I'm glad you stumbled on mine then, I think I feel honored. Hope you read other wonderful fics.

thegreyhawke April 12 2011, 04:43:18 UTC

This is a lovely addition. I enjoyed it a lot. I think the characters are IC in your own way, if that makes sense. I appreciate it because it's surprising without raping the characters.

simply_aly April 13 2011, 01:38:00 UTC

That does seem to happen a lot, doesn't it?

And I'm glad you think they're IC--writing 100 years in the future, I have no real idea how they'd act, so I'm kinda just going with my intuition.

anonymous April 12 2011, 07:45:23 UTC

I like! Glad you put the first three chapters with your latest update though, as I kind of forgot how they went and may have been too lazy to look them up again! Looking forward to more, so please update when you are able. Thanks!

simply_aly April 13 2011, 01:40:29 UTC

It is handy. I've found, as a reader, it is always nice when the previous chapters are linked. I'm too lazy to search through entries to find what I'm looking for sometimes. That's why I'm ridiculous when it comes to tags on this site as well.