Fic: Mixed Messages

May 17, 2010 23:51

Title: Mixed Messages
Series: ST XI
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4570
Disclaimer: They're not mine, unfortunately.
Notes: Written for notchka88 (because I promised her a K/S fic as welcome home gift) and _faeriequeen (because she was kind enough to write Ripe for me and I promised her a K/S shower scene).

Summary: Spock suspected his Captain was flirting with him. ( Read more... )

author: lallyloo, rating: nc-17, kirk/spock

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darkqueenmeg May 18 2010, 04:18:50 UTC
you just had to make the cake pink, didn't you? just trying to piss me off!!! :P

I did enjoy the camping cuddletimefest!!! i think though, that they should've been naked... you know, direct transfer of body head.... blah blah blah.... penis touching....blah blah blah.....

also enjoyed how Spock climbed (yes climbed, apparently the shower had a fortress around it) into the shower fully clothed and proceeded to fuck him with his wet pants still on. is it wrong that i find that adorable?????

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darkqueenmeg May 18 2010, 04:19:34 UTC
lol that was 'body heat'.....

body head?? what??? i dont even...

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lallyloo May 18 2010, 16:56:09 UTC
lol yeah I knew what you meant. Actually I didn't even notice the typo until you pointed it out..

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lallyloo May 18 2010, 16:55:22 UTC
lol I didn't even think of you when I made it pink.. I just needed something that would look edible and delicious.. :p

And yeah yeah naked penis touching camping, I know.. But it was more confusing this way because neither one was really sure what the other one wanted. So shhh.

And no, not wrong that you find that adorable. I like the idea of dazed, half-dressed, wet, aroused Spock fucking Jim in the shower.. In case you couldn't tell.

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lallyloo May 18 2010, 16:58:12 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it! :D

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lallyloo May 18 2010, 17:03:29 UTC
Haha you're welcome! Glad I could help! :D

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herinfiniteeyes June 15 2010, 05:19:30 UTC
Y'know, I kinda feel like I have to steal your icon now because that's my favorite line in the movie, haha:)

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kianspo May 18 2010, 10:22:31 UTC
A lovely, charming, warm tale! :D
Flirting is really the best part of romance. xD

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lallyloo May 18 2010, 17:04:01 UTC
Thank you! And I agree. :D

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_faeriequeen May 18 2010, 10:23:22 UTC
Hnnnnggggggg - thank you so much love! Wet Jim & Spock = UNF.

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lallyloo May 18 2010, 17:08:28 UTC
You're welcome! I was sort of worried because I actually started with the shower scene for you and then it all got out of control and I built the whole flirting thing (for Notchka88) around it.. lol so that's why it's for both of you.. :)

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_faeriequeen May 18 2010, 17:29:37 UTC
I loved the flirting too so it's all good! :)

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lallyloo May 19 2010, 07:35:17 UTC
:D

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