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simonthefish

Affliction, Ch. 4/4

Jan 14, 2009 15:50

Title: Affliction (Sequel to Possession.)
Fandom: Bleach (Grimmjow/Ulquiorra)
Rating: M (maybe better than that, even).
Warnings: angst, yaoi, possible OoC, really terribly written sex, first person
Summary: His eyes were so close, and so vast I thought I would fall right into them. But even then, I couldn’t read them. Not a bit.
Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

affliction, bleach, schifferjacks, fanfiction

Comments 5

iaxis January 15 2009, 00:25:29 UTC

oAo -thump thump thump thump- Oh my gosh. XD Love the ending chapter so much~! 8DD The entire time I had a racing heart with just what was going to happen next paragraph and beyond. I applaud you!!

Cx <333 If I ever get finished with Possession...I know for sure Affliction will be next one my list. 8D (I know I've asked this before, but I just have to say it. XD -shot-)

Thanks so much for writing this!! <333

simonthefish January 16 2009, 02:07:38 UTC

Thanks! Lol, I think you'd better see how Possession goes before you get started on Affliction XD But when the time does come, it's all yours.

kashinosei January 15 2009, 04:57:24 UTC

wow, i love the final part. Getting all lovey-dovey~ though I got a feeling of those, you know, the pillow talk that i might end up with a stupid grin on my face kinda..^^

simonthefish January 16 2009, 02:09:03 UTC

Yeah... just a little bit... sappy. Oh well, hehehe. Glad you liked it.

sofeenalee January 24 2009, 03:54:46 UTC

Noooo I can't believe it's finished. I'm really gonna miss this pair. I think you've pretty much set how their personality and relationship is for me now, I don't think any other GrimmUlqui fic will cut it for me. I wanted to read this like a week ago but my baka-aunt had us all visit her for a while.

One thing that's been on my mind tho, how on Earth did the other's find out??? That's really gonna bug me now.

Thanks so much for writing these wonderful fics, I've pretty much been your fan right from the get-go. Lookin forward to any other stuff you come up with. You should definately not stop, you've got a real talent for it.