Affliction, Ch. 1/4

[simonthefish]

Merry Christmas, all.

Title: Affliction (Sequel to Possession.)
Fandom: Bleach (Grimmjow/Ulquiorra)
Rating: M (maybe better than that, even).
Warnings: angst, yaoi, possible OoC, really terribly written sex, first person
Summary: His eyes were so close, and so vast I thought I would fall right into them. But even then, I couldn’t read them. Not a

Comments

[kashinosei]

I read Possession just. I seldom read POV fic but yours is really interesting. Loves to see how this goes, though the marry clarification hurts a bit. >.< ..

ﾟ･:*:･｡♪☆彡^･∋／[☆;:* Merry X'mas*:;☆ ]＼∈･^ミ☆♪｡･:*:･ﾟ

[simonthefish]

Yeah, I'm sorry about the whole marriage thing, really. I don't know what my stupid mind was thinking. Thanks for reading through it anyways!

[_miyabi]

wow, interesting.
i'm looking forward to reading more so post soon! :)

[simonthefish]

Thanks! New chapters on Wenesdays, lol.

[freyalilith]

I dont know why you think this first chapter sucks, its awsome!!!! I love UlqiGrimm, especially from Grimms pov. I like the way you've written both of them, a little more on the gently side than normal, more, real. Its really really good. I throughly enjoed this and more than looking forward to the next chapter!!

[simonthefish]

Well, it was mostly the whole marriage thing... God only knows what I was thinking when I wrote that. Thank you anyways, though, lol.

[keleosnoonna]

NOMNOMNOM YAY FOR SEQUEL!!!!!

Grimmjow's POV is really interesting, and I love the angsty atmoshpere!!
OMG YOU WRITE AWESOME GIMMY/ULQUI!! I really really love your style!!

and Happy Holidays btw!!

[simonthefish]

Thank you! Angst is what I do best, lol. And Grimmjow and Ulquiorra just have so much potential for angst... I can't resist!

Happy Holidays, lol.

WOW!!!!

[mayoranime]

once again awesome job!!!
Keep it up, plz!!! n I'll continue to read ur stor(y/ies)!!!

Re: WOW!!!!

[simonthefish]

Thanks!

[simonthefish]

Well, your comment made my morning, so I'd say we're even! Thank you for reading.