Comments | similiesslip: Not long now...

similiesslip

Not long now...

Jan 15, 2013 20:41

My Poem ( Read more... )

Comments 7

adoptedwriter January 16 2013, 03:03:02 UTC

Lovely but sad. Hugs. I remember
How it was when my dad passed.

similiesslip January 17 2013, 00:32:00 UTC

::hugs:: to you. Sorry if I reminded you of bad memories

adoptedwriter January 17 2013, 12:22:22 UTC

I'm good. It was a long time ago. Great poem. AW

dreamchaser January 16 2013, 19:32:20 UTC

*hugs* Thinking of you and your family.

similiesslip January 17 2013, 00:32:40 UTC

Thank you. I love your icon too.

whipchick January 17 2013, 13:18:01 UTC

Water drips
From the spoon
Of a faithful daughter.

Just beautiful. And the format of the last two lines is heart-wrenching. I hope you send this out.

unmowngrass January 17 2013, 19:30:36 UTC

I liked this bit too.