Remembrance
Author: Uli (ford_of_bruinen)
Beta: Enismirdal
Email: ford_of_bruinen@yahoo.co.uk
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Amrod/ Daeron
Warnings: Some not so gruesome character death. Using the HoMe version of the fate of Amras.
Request: Some angst, an open ending or a happy one; would like to see some thing telluric, agriculture, hunting, or in that line.
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I'm also impressed with Nimloth and what you've done with her here. She is, in her own way, the perfect teenage terrorist: she is simultaneously bold and frightened, petulant, utterly self-righteous, and lacks the maturity of judgment to see the full effects of her actions-- which will ultimately doom her. In terms of the internal logic of your story's universe, it's really an ideal set-up for the sack of Doriath and her eventual slaying.
The writing was beautiful, as well. I imagine Tallulah is absolutely thrilled to have received this-- I certainly would be! Excellent work!
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I have never tried to write Nimloth before so trying to capture her and make her part in this story, and the larger story in my head, make sense was challenging but fun. I am glad she came across as a teenage terrorist as that was exactly how I saw her here, full of emotions and the drama of teenagers without wisdom to temper her a bit. Also of course I wanted a reason for Amrod to have an intense dislike to her and her future children and same for his brothers.
thank you for this wonderful piece of feedback. I very much appretiate it.
*hugs*
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Despite really needing to read "happy" stories right now, I'm glad i read this. Thank you!
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This is both clever and plausible - a very good internal explanation for the external difference between the Silm and the somewhat late decision that Amras died at Losgar (the version of the story I've always preferred, myself).
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(the death of Amras at Losgar is better... yup I'm an angst bunny)
thank you for lovely feedback!
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