My entry

[ghostbard]

Here we go. This poem-type thing is my entry for the contest dealing with Rannon. It's not the best thing I've ever written, but it's not the worst either. It's based on a poem I read a long time ago that described one of the Roman Emperors. It took events in his life and made verses out of them. Well, here it is!

Comments

[dessyslava]

That's very nice. Me like a lot!! Dark and cool - just like Rannon.

[ghostbard]

Thank you. I seem to be regaining my interest in obscure and really unusual poetry again.

[silvestris]

Now this is really, really good! The flow is very powerful, and the words strong and alive. It tells the tale in a destilled and dynamic way, flashing by vivid scenes and images. I like it a lot! :D

[soawen]

But here he weaves his threads of power
Into a tapestry that helps the throne.

Exactly the picture I have! Thank you for sharing - as Silvestris said, the images are very strong.