Untitled.

[silviasometimes]

I mentioned a while ago that I managed to get 15/15 for my short story in the Trial HSC exam for English. Mr Hegarty wanted a copy of it and I've only just been bothered to type it up so I might as well post a copy of it on here as well. Without further ado:

Title: Untitled.
Rating: M15+
POV: Third & Second.
Summary: The stimulus that I chose was

Comments

[noteto__self]

omg. i wish i could write like that in an exam T_T

there was a few typos, but that was amazing. i love the way you incorporated my ideas and made them something new.
you srsly need to write more, not even lying.

[dusty_snow]

Wow, that's really good!
I adore your writing skills.

joseph SAad

[anonymous]

Holy...SHIT!!!!

MAde Writing skills, but obv uve preped that one for a while, and obv its prob a deeper reflection of yourself somehow...

congrats, ur amazing!
................. in writting skills :P

This is Sam P

[anonymous]

The only thing I don't like about reading stuff you write is knowing that the tone you used is much better crafted by you then by me. If that makes sense.

I dunno, it was good, I wish I had been able to do that in the exam because mine was a reflective piece as well -- just not as well done as yours. (Thats makes it sound like meat, doesn't it?)

Anyway, good job.