The O.C. Fic: Night Falls Fast
A one-shot for Maudgonne, picking up after The Outsider. Hope you like it.
( All of that pent up emotion in Casa Cohen has to find an outlet somewhere... )
( All of that pent up emotion in Casa Cohen has to find an outlet somewhere... )
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Oh, I loved it! Of course I did. I loved the silence in the car and Ryan's fear (I do miss the uncertain, wary Ryan on the show) and Seth's very Seth-like reassurance. Also, the image of Ryan wrapping the bedspread around himself and hiding the cereal boxes was really lovely. And the whole thing was very well-written too.
And JUMPSUITS! Yee!
I agree with everyone else that you must update Move On, because even though he isn't jumpsuited in that one, I do love me some incarcerated Ryan, all trapped and guilty and sad. Yay!
Thank you so much. I needed this today!
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(I do miss the uncertain, wary Ryan on the show)
Me too! hence the season one exploration. As much as I love cheeky chappy Ryan, there is such a notion as too much of a good thing, particularly when they do things like have him leave a girl on the beach!! Maybe the happy is from pot smoking, which would make him dopey, cute and irritable.
Yes, the jumpsuit was deliberate, you little freak. You're so funny! Move On is next on the agenda. having taken time out to one-shot dabble, it's coming so much easier.
And not many people know it, but I've got the follow up all mapped out.
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1. Ryan wrapped in duvet....Mmmmm
2. For implanting the image of Ryan siphoning the python..Mmmmm
3. Angsty/broody Ryan in any form.....Yeah
4. Ryan/ Seth bonding...Ahhhh bless
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Siphoning the python? Ew!! (Although that is exactly what he was doing.)
Bring back Seth and Ryan time. Now, dammit!
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