The Window: Chapter 11...

[silvershiner]

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings:  May contain pips.

Window

Chapter Eleven

Sakura sat outside her mother’s house long before she dared knock on the door. It was cold, her arms were prickled with gooseflesh, and every now and then a drop of water landed on her knee as the sky threatened to spill over as it had

Comments

[bjfactory]

Maybe this a mistake- "this was"

and this ddn't quite make sense to me... for the last line

How could he refuse any offer this girl made of him?

should the of be a to? Isn't an offer made to and not made of? Maybe I'm wrong... but I just thought... urr...^_^;;

Fanart_FINISHED

[kuramasbluegurl]

I finished the painting, here's the link http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55289380/

Let me know what you think! :)

Re: Fanart_FINISHED

[silvershiner]

That's fantastic! And so cheeky! X3 I love it so much - thank you! And thank DarrinIthamar as well for me too. <3

*save no jutsu*

Re: Fanart_FINISHED

[kuramasbluegurl]

You are very welcome!!!
We hope it gives you inspiration. :)
Cause we certainly get it from reading your stories <3

[kohaku_hoshi]

you tease. :P I like this, keep it up! I came here from that fanart that clever blue posted :P

[fresica]

Gah! You tease! Oh, well. I was hoping that the Kakasaku action would begin soon... Love the chapter. And Kakashi taking piano lessons is priceless.

[akakoseven]

AHH! I'm not much of a fanfic person, and less of a hetero person but I LOVE YOUR NARRATION. It makes me smile all the time. x3 And your portrayal of Kakashi is excellent. I constantly get frustrated whenever I read something in which Kakashi is depicted as some idiot without wit.