Comments | silverraven: The Banker and the Hooligan, Part Four

silverraven

The Banker and the Hooligan, Part Four

Jul 16, 2012 22:03

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ayane42 July 17 2012, 22:21:10 UTC

this was a wonderful story!!!

i loved those photos at the beginning though. Hamilton Pool? I live in Austin and have never been there. Jeez, if that's what it looks like, what am I doing sitting here at my computer?

Just a great story, I really really loved this!!

silverraven July 17 2012, 23:30:22 UTC

Thank you!! I'm just delighted to hear you enjoyed this.

From the images Google showed me, Hamilton Pool is absolutely gorgeous. If I was anywhere near Texas, I would so join you in going. :)

Thanks for reading and your kind words!

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silverraven July 18 2012, 23:19:41 UTC

Thanks! Gramms was such a hoot to write, I only wish I could have included her and her pervy ways a little more ;)

Thank you for reading and the lovely comment! I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed this!

somer July 18 2012, 08:34:01 UTC

Oh my god! This was awesome!! Loved how Jared rattled Jensen's well organized life! And of course Jensen didn't stand a chance :)

LOVED IT!!!

P.S. GRAMMS FTW!!!!!!

silverraven July 18 2012, 23:22:32 UTC

YAY!! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed this! And that you liked Gramms -- she was so fun to write.

Thanks for reading and the great comment! It's much appreciated.

bugmcsnug July 18 2012, 10:02:56 UTC

God I loved this! It was just the kind of J2 I was looking to read tonight - the kind of J2 I love :)

And Betty White as Jensen's Grams was a stroke of genius!

Thanks for sharing :)

silverraven July 18 2012, 23:29:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad this was the kind of J2 you like. And *blushes* I'm not sure if Betty White was genius but when I realized she was exactly the personality I had in mind for Jensen's grandmother, I couldn't resist XD

Thanks for taking the time to read and the kind feedback!

blodyn1 July 18 2012, 13:23:11 UTC

Great fic I really enjoyed this. The pictures in the first chapter were beautiful.
I loved the way that their relationship developed and I really didn't see the ending coming - how I didn't make the connection with JP Inc I don't know LOL!
Gramms was awesome and I loved some of the comments that she came out with!
: )

silverraven July 20 2012, 01:00:55 UTC

Yay, I'm so pleased you did! And I was hoping people wouldn't make the connection with JP Inc. until the ending, heee ;)

Thanks very much for reading and the lovely feedback! It's much appreciated.