Go Marion! Standing up for Timothy, very Rose. John is hopeless, in otherwords, just like the Doctor. This is wonderful. Can't wait to see more :)
By the way, Just so you know, a couple of points where Tim become a girl. The young boy startled when she felt a hand on her shoulder and a handkerchief presented to her. He shook her head, Timothy had told her even though the girl had already
Yikes! Thanks for that. Originally, I wasn't going to use Tim, but then he would have simply disappeared. I thought I'd caught all the changes. <.< I'll get to them now.
He is, isn't he? I hope the next chapter does him a bit of justice. I seem to be more focused on Marion and John. They just deserve a bit of happiness before...stuff happens...
Thank you! Honestly, I think the next chapter is the last bit for the rewrite before I dive into what the prompt was really about: Ianto! XD I'm glad you're enjoying it nonetheless and will hopefully have more up soon.
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By the way, Just so you know, a couple of points where Tim become a girl.
The young boy startled when she felt a hand on her shoulder and a handkerchief presented to her. He shook her head,
Timothy had told her even though the girl had already
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Glad you enjoyed despite those blatant errors!
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