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[silverlily35]

English essay: Read, review, critique, whatever. (Just keep in mind that nothing deep has really happened to me yet, so I kind of had to work with what I had... ;-)

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The air smelled of chlorine from the nearby pool and citronella from the candle that slowly made its way among the group seated on the deck. The sun was just setting behind

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[rigor_mortis89]

*glomp*

You write gorgeous prose, dearie. Milanese had better read this. Because it's an fine example. And it's deep. Deep enought to fulfill its purpose. Lovelylovelylovely!!!!

Guh...I LURVE that Black Velvet song.

[silverlily35]

*glomps back*

Thank you so much for saying that! I was actually really nervous about this essay, so I really appreciate you saying it was good!

[meshugenah_89]

Damn. mine utterly sucks, as I now realise. why did I feel compelled to read this? you make me look bad (and short).

I agree with all Heather said. and if I had realised this was here sooner (like, beofre saturday morning) I would have offered to be a mean editor. but it's sunday, so it ain't happening.

*mutters about annoying people who can write well, and SHORT!* (aka mine is too long, too). shutting up