That was so sweet! (The ending. Other parts were sad, hot, tense, wonderfully choreographed action... you get the idea.)
I checked your journal again (finally) and look! More Roundabout! I love this series. I really do. (Have I mentioned that every part of this series is in my mems? That's how much I love it.) And the tension finally breaks! That needed to happen. Seriously. Every bit of it needed to happen. (I should mention that I haven't seen the new episodes of JF since... "Race for the Nexus", so thanks very much for the brief recap!)
The way you wrote about human interaction -- their grief, the movement of their sparing, their passion -- was so vivid. I wish I could give you some sort of writing Oscar!
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The tension throughout is something I couldn't look away from, and I'm glad SOMEONE gave R.J. a hug, because I really wanted to *sniffs*
thank you!
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I checked your journal again (finally) and look! More Roundabout! I love this series. I really do. (Have I mentioned that every part of this series is in my mems? That's how much I love it.) And the tension finally breaks! That needed to happen. Seriously. Every bit of it needed to happen. (I should mention that I haven't seen the new episodes of JF since... "Race for the Nexus", so thanks very much for the brief recap!)
Love it! Here's more Muse dust for next chapter!
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