More Than Coffee - Chapter 4 - Thursday

Mar 27, 2011 12:36

Title: More Than Coffee (4/5)
Chapter Title: Thursday
Rating: PG
Spoilers (if any): Sexy
Warnings (if any): Pre-Klaine, Blaine and Burt
Word Count: ~1700
Disclaimer: I do not own Glee or the characters. I do not make money from this.
Summary: When Kurt goes on Spring Break with the rest of New Directions, Blaine shows up at Burt's garage, not knowing what ( Read more... )

blaine, pre-klaine, more than coffee, burt

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ssecca01 March 27 2011, 17:52:28 UTC
This FIC! It makes me ache for Blaine and love Burt even more and admire your talent and skill even more than I do already. Much love my dear!

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silverdragon87 March 28 2011, 03:01:24 UTC
LOL at your icon. It's oddly appropriate for this chapter.

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoy this as much as you do. Much love xx

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evenafterdeath March 27 2011, 17:53:32 UTC
this is my first comment in this comm - i've been lurking, so feel special! :P I love this fic - burt is just so cute and fun to read about, and annnything with blaine in is always a win. :D

thanks for sharing, and update soon! :D

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silverdragon87 March 28 2011, 03:03:25 UTC
Wow, I do feel special. Thank you! I'm so, so happy that you like this fic and that you're enjoying my characterizations of Burt and Blaine, they're fun and difficult to write.

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cacell March 27 2011, 18:04:15 UTC
I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOAR

Quality, bb <3

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silverdragon87 March 28 2011, 03:03:54 UTC
Oh you whore, all you want is MOOOOAR...

lol

ILY.

Thank you dear <3

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cacell March 28 2011, 03:04:30 UTC
Yes. I am. I regret nothing.

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sinkwriter March 27 2011, 18:12:02 UTC
This is fascinating.

First of all, I love this Burt and Blaine dynamic. I adore Burt's characterization, and his observations about Blaine, and how Blaine just keeps coming back to his shop, like he needs something there (and given what we've seen on the show, I do think it's more than just about Kurt; there's definitely a father/family issue thing as well).

And I love how many things are left unsaid, like in real life conversations. So many questions that could be asked that aren't, so many comments that could be made... and they remain silent. Both Burt and Blaine. Which creates a fascinating tension and build-up to so many possibilities.

Which makes me want to know more and read more.

Next chapter, please. :)

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silverdragon87 March 28 2011, 03:18:59 UTC
Oh sinkwriter, your review is completely precious. I'm so glad that you enjoy their dynamic, it's been interesting, and challenging, to write. Blaine really kind of does need something there, something more than just Kurt, he needs an adult male figure (father figure) to accept him for who he is and Burt can sort of give him that.

As for their conversations, thank you. One thing I've really struggled with as a writer is trying to create conversations that feel real and have that element of things that are thought, but aren't said, questions that aren't asked, comments that aren't made. So, thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Soon. I hope. I don't like to make promises about this sort of thing because I never know when live is going to get in my way, or when my OTP is going to be canon and start making out on television...

:D

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silverdragon87 March 28 2011, 03:23:31 UTC
Thank you. Yeah, I guess with a few changes, and from what we know about some things to come, it really could fit into canon. I'd just have to make them a couple and it would fit.

I tried to think about Burt's thoughts from the perspective of a parent. I tried to put myself in his place. He's lost a wife and he has this kid that he doesn't totally understand, but who needs him, and he's growing up, and he knows, rationally, that someday Kurt will grow up and he'll probably move away from Ohio and he won't need his dad anymore and idk, having a boyfriend, having a significant other, someone else he can rely on, yeah, Kurt would need Burt a little less and it's just another reminder that Kurt is growing up and he's going to be leaving soon.

This got really long, really fast, sorry.

I know the feeling about want to know how it ends, but not wanting it to end. I'm glad that you feel that way :D

Thank you for this comment.

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