Comments | silvercaladan: #72 -- Fixed GW/Fantastic Four

silvercaladan

#72 -- Fixed GW/Fantastic Four

Jan 28, 2006 16:27

Title: Objectives
Author: silvercaladan
Fandom: Gundam Wing/Fantastic Four
Word Count: 2309
Challenge: #72 -- Fixed
Rating: Rish
A/N: Completely AU, sort of like if the superhero serum from Marvelverse existed in the clutches of the Alliance. Reed Richards is NOT out of character, I’ve just emphasized his scientific interest and disconnected attitude more than ( Read more... )

crossovers100, gw, crossover, fic, challenges, f4

Comments 9

just a hyphen of a critique hopelessshade January 28 2006, 18:03:58 UTC

beyond-secret.

Re: just a hyphen of a critique silvercaladan January 29 2006, 00:36:32 UTC

you couldn't have said something slightly more helpful or praising or belittling?

Re: just a hyphen of a critique hopelessshade January 29 2006, 11:05:57 UTC

well, you caught a bunch of little things as part of what makes how you write so great, like the flourescents and the clipboard, and the good doctor is sufficiently wacko. but wouldnt the c4 blow up the entire ship? dunno, it makes me feel like i missed something.

is that what you wanted?

Re: just a hyphen of a critique silvercaladan January 29 2006, 11:09:51 UTC

cept they are not on a ship... Its an Alliance base, which means Earth. OZ is the one with weird shit up in space. But I couldn't have expected you to know that :)

And explosions on Earth don't travel as far as ones in spaceships, due to gravity and the whole not-as-oxygen-rich atmosphere... It also depends on the shielding and other stuff in the walls how far a little C4 would go. *giggles*

But yes, that is what I was looking for, thank you.

Thread 5

anonymous January 29 2006, 00:48:18 UTC

Good. I wonder what other people from the marvel universe could be put in Gundam Wing. (Definitely weapon X.)
I was just thinking the other day that with the G-boys in outer space all the time what would happen if the were hit by cosmic radiation maybe some could write it (since I to lazy to write it myself.)

silvercaladan January 29 2006, 11:14:06 UTC

I've already written one with the X-Men as sort of free-lance anti-terrorists... which means they get called in to help the Alliance and OZ a lot. I also wrote it so that most of them would be totally for helping the government, because they live on Earth, after all. Anyway, its all twisted and fun.

But yea, your idea sounds innnnteresting. I wouldn't write it, though. I'd get pissed off at myself for trying to replace the goodness that is Johnny Storm.

smercy January 29 2006, 02:43:15 UTC

but where is the invisible woman? I heard she wanted some hot heero-action...
and I seem to notice, dear, that you haven't really included any of the other gundam boys in your fics. or the chick with the crazy eyebrows (was it dorothy?) or releena for that matter. shut up, I don't care if her name isn't spelled right.
what's next?

silvercaladan January 29 2006, 11:11:13 UTC

Yeaaaa... I like to mention them, but I don't like a large cast of characters. I can only keep track of so many before they start going HAYWIRE on me. I should include Dorothy, though. It'd be awesome. Dorothy was the scary shit. Who also had a thing for Relena. *giggles*