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silverbelle1220

SimStoCreMo Drabble - Fireside Chat

Mar 31, 2012 22:12

Last drabble is done! And thus, I win CreMo this year.

Warning: Spoilers ahead. Well, sort of. I'm just following history here, so if you didn't see this coming shame on your US history teacher!

( Fireside Chat )

story: bradford legacy, character: nicholas, prompt: simspiration, character: sterling, character: james, spoilers: plotz, character: calla, character: cindy, character: thaddeus, prompt responce: writing, character: viola

Comments 4

katee412 April 1 2012, 03:33:20 UTC

This was beautifully done and really portrayed the character's emotions.

silverbelle1220 April 1 2012, 23:10:16 UTC

Thank you.

rosefyre April 1 2012, 05:36:30 UTC

Nice! Though it threw me out a little that the president was saying America and you were saying Simerica - if you include this in a chapter, I'd edit it. Which, I know you're directly quoting, but I'd change it to the sim words and not change anything else. But still, it's great to see the effects of war!

silverbelle1220 April 1 2012, 23:12:47 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, I forgot to change the President's speech to reflect the fact that it's taking place in my world. I will fix it if this ends up in a chapter.

I figure it's time to start bringing in what's going on in the larger world into the plot line, as it will affect what's going to happen to the characters.