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joandsarah March 30 2014, 01:35:58 UTC
Aww such a lovely chapter. I had wondered how things would go with Shadow and the whole werwolf thing. Good idea to only have the transformation on the full moon, which makes much more sense than Maxis's every night change.

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silverbelle1220 March 30 2014, 23:21:05 UTC
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Thanks! Yeah, Shadow and Jimmy worked things out. I was never a fan of EAxis's take on werewolves either, which is why I adapted the canon of the BRRL to fit my
needs.

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scribal_goddess March 30 2014, 03:39:33 UTC
Aaaawwwwww!

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silverbelle1220 March 30 2014, 23:21:33 UTC
:D Glad you liked it!

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tatdatcm March 30 2014, 05:23:40 UTC
So glad things worked out for Desi. It's nice to see those recessives back in the family.

I love the song you used to close out the chapter.

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silverbelle1220 March 30 2014, 23:22:25 UTC
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Glad you liked what I came up with for Desi. Recessives are pretty awesome, imo.

It really is a great song, and it really seemed to fit Desi quite
well.

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biglenny March 31 2014, 08:00:18 UTC
Congrats on finishing Desdemona’s story!

[Spoiler (click to open)]Heh, Roxanna should definitely be in her daughters dream to assure her that none of the events in the past were her fault. I find it one of the most awesome moments in the story because it shows how tight-knit the Dorans are in times of trouble. :D

I’m so glad to see that Desdemona and Jimmy finally married despite their initial difficulties after the restaurant date. I also love the cabin’s new look because it seems to reflect the new her after her dream with Roxanna. Their kids are adorable as well.

That was a really sweet ending!

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silverbelle1220 March 31 2014, 17:42:32 UTC
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Yeah, Desi needed a little kick in the rear, and her mom was just the person to do it. I love how close the Dorans are too, considering the fact that they’re often spread out across the multi-verse.

Desi and Jimmy are quite good for each other, even if they did start out on the wrong foot. The issue of how to deal with Jimmy’s lycanthropy had to be dealt with, and because both of them are stubborn it wasn’t going to go well. I had a lot of fun redecorating the cabin, because I knew that Desi would be all “this rustic thing isn’t working for me,” and Jimmy would go along with whatever she wanted, within reason (hence there still being some more neutral tones instead of all wild colors). Their kids are great. Since you didn’t get to do much more than see them, I’ll have some more on their personalities in the BTS I’m working on.

:D Glad you liked the chapter.

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rosefyre April 28 2014, 20:14:00 UTC
So I'm super late on that whole commenting thing...oops?

[Comment]Yay for Desdemona getting a kick in the pants! Because, dude, she needed it... )

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silverbelle1220 May 2 2014, 23:34:23 UTC
Late comment is still greater than no comment.

[Link to spoiler]Desdemona really did need a kick in the rear. She needed to start living her life and not dwelling on the past... )

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