I Hate Everything About You

Jan 23, 2007 23:10

WARNING: This is my first every NC-17 Fanfiction. Please be nice with the comments.

Title: I Hate Everything About You
Author: vegetasbubble
Origin: Harry Potter
Genre: Romance, Smut, Songfic
Rating: NC-17
Chapter: One, OneShot, Complete
Paring: Draco/Hermione

This story is rated NC-17 for obvious reasons. It contains sexual scenes and is not sutible for ( Read more... )

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arthicule January 23 2007, 14:27:33 UTC
my only comment is that there's too much OOCness...it would have been nice if Hermione would've stuck to her stubborn self and Draco to his pride. Well, I guess that's just my opinion...I don't like too much OOCness...the challenge's no longer there...as well as the thrill and the factor that will keep readers on the edge of their seats to want to know what will happen next...

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delicate_touchx January 23 2007, 18:30:28 UTC
even if it was OOC, it still sounded so realistic in someway. i don't know hwo, but it just seemed to fit. but the fluff was good, so that's a plus and there wasn't too much smut to make it raunchy. i loved it! great job :)

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scent_of_autumn January 23 2007, 18:37:49 UTC
I definitely liked it, and I'm going to add this one-shot to silver_vs_gold's memories!
Wonderful job! I LOVE you!

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