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silver_ring5

Locked Away at Sea 1.6

Apr 07, 2013 13:49

A fanfiction pairing Enomoto Kei and Aoto Junko, wherein they're joined by quite a few familiar faces as they work to save the lives of an entire cruise ship of people.
Rating: NC-17, (smut at sea, ne?)
Length: Multiple Parts, Ongoing-- I know I said this would be the last chapter, but there needs to be one more.

( Locked Away at Sea 1.6 )

nazotoki wa dinner no ato de confession, lucky seven, kagi heya, ohno satoshi, enomoto kei, kageyama, nazodi, kitagawa keiko, kagi no kakatta heya, eita, tokita shuntaro, nitta, arashi, ninomiya kazunari, aiba masaki, hosho reiko, matsumoto jun, toda erika, sakurai sho, aoto junko, mikeneko holmes no suiri

Comments 8

anto96 April 8 2013, 15:58:49 UTC

i was checking for new chapter as usual and there it was, 1.6, yayyy! Thank you ^^ you do know that you made them seem so real and so very like how the characters would act in the actual doramas right, cause you are so awesome! but what to do, Enomoto was shot :( hope he will be fine :(

eeee silver_ring5 April 9 2013, 02:17:16 UTC

thank you for reading and liking it! I was afraid that some parts are unclear or confusing, so if there's anything I could explain better (or didn't explain, like I think I need to explain how Enomoto transported the frozen bioweapon from the safe to the kitchens), please tell me!

And thank you again! I really love writing these characters-- probably because I love the characters themselves, so it was fun. I try to stay true to them, and I'm really happy you liked them.

Enomoto will probably be fine. Or he'll die. Either way, I'll try to find some way to fit in more smut with someone. Maybe several someones.

Re: eeee anto96 April 19 2013, 16:24:57 UTC

it would be nice of you taking time to explain^^ when i read it, i just simply thought he carried it with his bare hands??! or is it me who's a simpleton? lol

Re: eeee silver_ring5 April 20 2013, 02:34:14 UTC

You're not a simpleton, I had totally failed to explain. I went back and changed it so Enomoto carries it in an ice bucket. <3 Please always tell me when I leave something out or am confusing.

yurie_lovedayz April 9 2013, 15:02:36 UTC

when find out there is an update, yattaaa!! you did it ^^d

you amazing you know, to describe everything so smoothly and i feeling like watching the drama with them there.. my native language isn't english, and maybe i'm not read it as much as you want me to understand it, but i really have fun reading this..that's why i'm always waiting ^^

hope enomoto will be fine...

waiting for next ^^

Thank you! silver_ring5 April 10 2013, 03:23:03 UTC

I'm so glad you're reading my story and that you like it! I'm so impressed by anyone who speaks/reads multiple languages, so if there's anything I can do to make it more clear, let me know!

cebxca April 20 2013, 23:59:56 UTC

YAAAAYY! Update!! :) This was very tense :P like a good crime drama should be! I really enjoyed the teaming up :) The Kageyama/Reiko dynamic was quite funny too with the screaming and him instantly appearing, it made me laugh.
Really enjoyable :D

yay! Thank you! silver_ring5 April 21 2013, 00:39:56 UTC

I like them teaming up too, I love all the characters so much. I'm glad you like the interaction between Kageyama and Reiko. Maybe it's just me, but I think wrote a cute bit for them in the "last" chapter I'm going to post soon (if not tonight, tomorrow). There's going to have be an epilogue. Because even though I wrote another chapter, I still think it feels unfinished. If you read 1.7, let me know if you think there are still loose ties, etc. Or if you'd like to see more of a different character's viewpoint. idk. Anyway, thank you again!