Persuation

[silver_rayan]

Hey guys! After a year and a half I have finally finished chapter 3 of Persuation, my TFA MegatronxOptimus fic. However I am not sure I like it. I was wondering if someone could read it over and tell me what they think, particularly whether or not the ending feels rushed. Thanks!

Rayan

Comments

[libbybird22]

if you are still looking for someone to look the chapter over, I would be willing to do so if you are still intrested.

libbybird22

[silver_rayan]

Thank you! Can you send me your email address? I'll send the story as an attachment.

[libbybird22]

my address is libbybird22@yahoo.com or you can use npasek@gmail.com.
I check both daily.

[murr_miay_irvis]

Hello there! ^^ This is murr_miay - I really-really want to read this - could you send me Part 3 of your fanfic, please? my mail adress is murr_miay@mail.ru