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gingerrangerftw October 31 2010, 21:08:27 UTC
This is amazingly written :D I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter, I love Arsenal in this as well :'D It's so well thought out and wonderfuul to read :) THANK YOU <3

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silver_kite November 8 2010, 14:18:03 UTC
Thanks for commenting! :) I'm glad you've enjoyed it. your maru icon is adorable!

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silver_kite November 8 2010, 14:18:44 UTC
Because I'm emo. Haha. IDK. I'm a bit sadistic, aren't I? xD

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silver_kite November 9 2010, 09:10:33 UTC
ROFL. ILY <3 Haha

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moka_n_waffles November 1 2010, 23:55:59 UTC
YOU. <3

I loved this chapter so much!! The way you explained his past and... just. GAH. You write beautifully, I can view all the scenes as if it was a movie. Great job!!

Also, Ryo, Yoko and the watermelon. It reminded me of an old photoshooting of them. =)

I'm definitely tracking your tag. I just need to figure out how to do it XD. I'm looking forward to the rest! <333333

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silver_kite November 8 2010, 14:21:33 UTC
Thanks for checking this out again :) The 8U PoP and trailer were filmed beautifully, so it sorta inspired me to try and describe each scene. Description has always been my weakness, so I'm trying to work on it.

Yeah, I intentionally added the watermelon part because of the shooting xD HAHA

I've posted a new chapter. CLICK HERE to be linked. At the end of it I have a new A/N that describes how to track a tag.

Again, thanks for reading this :)

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lastingdreams8 November 3 2010, 03:53:36 UTC
OMG!! Poor Ohkura.
I liked how you've continued this universe, how Johnny was not originally part of the gang, why Gum is called Gum lol :P
And I can see that Johnny is already falling for Ai. I especially loved your ending sentence, because it's the last thing Johnny sees before blacking out -that'll probably stay in his memory, Ai's flower <3

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silver_kite November 8 2010, 14:23:38 UTC
Thanks for continuing to read this <3 LOL. The angst will hopefully die down and have its quirky moments..one day. Haha.

Ai's a lovable character and I'm sorta regretting killing her off because she was so full of life.

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askina_spn November 4 2010, 23:57:29 UTC
I loved it, just like the first chapter. I'll keep reading ^^
Thank you :)

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silver_kite November 8 2010, 14:24:06 UTC
Thanks for letting me know :) I'm glad you enjoyed it ~ Haha <3

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